Sunday on a Saturday Afternoon - 13/20

Dec 08, 2007 12:15

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Title: Somewhere Down This Road
Pairing: Alex/Addison
Rating: PG
Summary: An anniversary and fluff. I make no apologies.

Somewhere Down This Road

Addison liked flowers and chocolates. She liked being surprised with breakfast in bed and being wooed in the traditional sense. She knew she was never getting jewelry out of Alex, and ( Read more... )

grey's anatomy, sunday on a saturday afternoon, alex/addison

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still_might_be December 8 2007, 19:05:12 UTC
a familiar lump Aw. How romantic.

He liked that he was always kept abreast of what was to come the following day, even if he was having trouble keeping his eyes open. I just really like the image of a sleepy Alex lying there with eyes half-open while Addison rattles off a detailed plan for tomorrow.

I’m like the giant squid of catches Hee! Your Callie is delightful. I like her exasperation at Addison's one-track mind, too.

Izzie, who fell in love as quickly as she wrote post-op notes. Ooh, burn.

I love that you absolutely were not kidding when you said that "nothing happens" in this chapter. You are made of win, and this was lovely! :D

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lavenderseaslug December 9 2007, 06:26:29 UTC
I know. I am so true to my word. Thanks for reading, you.

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anonymous December 8 2007, 21:32:11 UTC
No apology wanted or needed! Fluff is a wonderful thing when it's this lovely, and yay! happy anniversary to the pretties.

AddisonRules

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lavenderseaslug December 9 2007, 14:05:05 UTC
Thank you very much, glad you liked it.

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xyliette December 8 2007, 22:46:57 UTC
I woke up this morning and said to myself, "Sarah! It's Saturday, updates!" Literally that was the thought process and the fluff was wonderful. Thank you again for the understated. For no overly romantic nights, no rose petals, and no jewelry. It's so much more in character and intriguing this way. Wonderful job!

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lavenderseaslug December 9 2007, 14:06:25 UTC
Aww, that's wonderful. And I'm glad you appreciate the understated. Thank you so much.

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anonymous December 9 2007, 00:52:35 UTC
My super annoying, overbearing, thinkssheknowsitall english teacher once said, that if you say something twice, you need to say it three times. I asked her why two wasn't good, and she said "It just isn't. Back to your vocabulary, now." Hmm. Still don't know that answer...

But you mentioned the fuzzy bathrobe three times. And it was absolutely perfect.

I also can't believe an entire year passed. I'm not good with passing time in fanfics.

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lavenderseaslug December 9 2007, 14:08:12 UTC
I was just using the Chekovian "If you mention a gun in the first act, it had better go off by the third." And I think your English teacher might just have made that up.

I really have no distinct timeline, except that for things that are to come, some time needs to have passed.

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anonymous December 9 2007, 01:51:15 UTC
I have been following this since the beginning and haven't been to good at commenting so I would like to first of all apologize for that.

Also, this is pretty awesome. At first I was kind of disappointed for her, but then I read this: "the fact that he was here was enough" and realized...that is so true. Plus, I think back to all the chapters you have written and even their characters on the show and I think that may very well be realistic of who they are.

One more thing...I am intrigued by your title. Why "Sunday on a Saturday Afternoon?" I don't think I have missed something throughout the storyline that may have contributed to this (though it is possible) and I cannot for the life of me think of an album or song with that name. So ya....do you mind explaining that part, because I am genuinely interested. =)

~Naaz

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lavenderseaslug December 9 2007, 06:26:02 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

And the title is something that I'll explain at the end of the series because I don't want to give too much away at the moment.

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anonymous December 9 2007, 06:28:36 UTC
Fair enough.

~Naaz

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