Sunday on a Saturday Afternoon - 8/20

[lavenderseaslug]

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Title: I've Tried to Page You Twice
Pairing: Alex/Addison
Rating: PG
Summary: A friendship date that leads to something that ends up leading nowhere.

I’ve Tried to Page You Twice

Alex had many undesirable traits, this he knew. But among these many undesirable traits, he possessed a few good ones. He was

Comments

[irinafan]

Lovely. I feel weird giving you a longer feedback, what with my mom sitting in the corner and looking at me strangely, so I will come back tomorrow afternoon. =)

[lavenderseaslug]

Oh, completely understandable. :)

[irinafan]

so, I'm a little late. Sorry about that.

He knew her so well.

I was just going to comment on that, I re-read the chapter before this and this one, and Addison was filling all the conversation silences with "anecdotes", so he must really know her very well by now. :D

I like that they can have a honest talk about the whole kissing thing and neither freaks out completely.

Said kissing was cute, btw, and I hope there'll be more of it later.

[three_fates1987]

So right. I'm really enjoying the characters journey's in this story so far. You can write them both so well, down to the little details like tone and gesture, which makes reading this story a pleasure. Awesome work thus far.

[lavenderseaslug]

Thanks so much, I appreciate that.

[xyliette]

Oh, I like it! They wouldn't be them without the constant struggle of the back and forth. Good to see Alex back under her (even if not in the literal sense just yet) Keep it up!

[lavenderseaslug]

So true. Thanks for reading. :)