fic: when air was less solid than the soul (2/6) [dean/castiel, supernatural]

[sempiternities]

Title: when air was less solid than the soul,  one | the first steps (through deserts unwritten)
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: PG-13 (eventually R)
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything, this is a work of fiction.
Warnings: language; spoilers for Supernatural season 4, 5 and 6 (this chapter: 4x16 until 5x01)
Beta: Thanks and credit goes to flwrpwr_vampyre for beta'ing!

Comments

[dark_cygnet]

aw. poor Cas. Let's hope Dean catches the clue bus and fast. Looking forward to the next part.

[sempiternities]

I'm happy you're still reading, thanks a lot for the comment!

[elfinmouse]

That ending was heartbreaking, Castiel making it rain and waiting until Dean turned him down, especially after how pleased and happy he was moments before. And then Dean's guilt.

I love the idea of Castiel obsessing over a card palace - especially from the ceiling.

[sempiternities]

I'm so glad you liked it! I personally really enjoyed writing the last part, with the card house. There's so much you can do with this pairing. Thanks for commenting!

[kojonoyuri]

This is really interesting so far!

I really loved how gleeful Cas was over his card Cathedral! lol! If Dean doesn't realize the extent of Cas's feeling's for him now he's pretty dense. I think the "angel tantrum" says it all. Here's hoping that Dean wises up soon and just kisses the poor angel.

Great job! Looking forward to more!

[sempiternities]

Dean wouldn't be Dean without some macho denial. :P

Thanks a lot for taking the time to comment, glad you like it!

[jem_018]

I really loved how serious Cas was with his card Cathedral. Even hanging from the ceiling, that's commitment right there. Haha! :D

Oh no. Poor Cas. Dean definitely needs to get a clue.

I love this. I can't wait for the next part. :D

[sempiternities]

Yes, only angels can have commitment like that. I'd give up after five minutes and start doing card tricks or something.
I'm pretty sure Dean's got the clue. Now he has to be willing to face it, though.

Thank you for that lovely comment! I'm gonna go continue writing the next chapter. :D

[dazedrose]

Poor Cas. Its confusing being around humans. Especially emotionally stunned men who just can't work out much in the scheme of emotional issues.

I loved it!!

[sempiternities]

Yeah, Cas really picked the wrong guy to fall for, Dean is as mentally conflicted as they come.

It makes me happy to see you're still reading, thanks for the comment!