fic: of prospects and pillow fights [hoosier/runner, the pacific]

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Title: Of prospects and pillow fights 
Pairing: Hoosier/Runner
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The contents of this story are entirely fictional and they don’t concern the real men from World War II, but the actors. I don’t own anything.
Warnings: Language, minor rape joke. 
A/N: As always, thanks and credit goes to 

Comments

[teaspoonery]

Welcome back! *goes read*

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Thanks, hun! You just reminded me of how nice everyone is in this fandom.<3
I've been hanging around other (bigger) communities, but they never get me to feel as cozy as this one and camp toccoa do. Makes me wonder why.

[teaspoonery]

The fandom(s) is (are) awesome (but I won't ever say everyone again, you were gone just in time). I bet it's exactly because they're so small-scaled, and there's not really any hate towards other pairings.

Of course, it's also easier to read all fic that's written in a fandom like this than something in, say, the Merlin fandom where you get at least five fics daily. Though there probably still are a lot of lazy people who don't comment.

long!con-critical comment is long (1/2)

[teaspoonery]

Writing this as I go (since you asked for con-crit)! Also, sorry for the comparatively large time between the first reply and the 2nd (I could long have answered if it weren’t for shit), I know I hate it.

‘I wasn’t exactly going to sleep,’ Hoosier said in a low, aggravated voice. ‘I thought I’d relax in another kind of way now I had some quality time.’ He paused. ‘Get what I mean?’

I think Hoosier (or any guy, really) would be much more straightforward about that. While the army seems pretty homophobic at times, they are guys, and guys really don’t have any problems discussing masturbation.

I’d have liked it if you would’ve made it into a little more of a power-play, teasing back-and-forth, testing whether the other is meaning it or still joking. After all, while wanking seemed pretty normal to discuss (I even heard somewhere the word ‘wank’ is derived from the way an army bed creaks when a soldier gets off) homosexuality was not done (except when it was). This is my personal opinion though.

Meanwhile Hoosier just keeps standing

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

God I love this. Especially him playing with the bite mark at the end... Unf.

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Thanks, again! <3
(Also, "unf" should be added to the dictionary -- seeing it in comments makes me way too happy for it not to be an official word. Who's with me?)

[redsplodge]

I could've sworn I'd commented on this, but obviously not - I must have imagined it, I hope so, or I've left a random comment on another fic.

I liked this - well I do love Runner and Hoosier - all that tension and awkwardness was rather hot and this bit:
He makes that last word sound filthy.

Runner wants to curse out loud but he doesn’t, because no way he trusts his voice at the moment and the slightest quiver would mean defeat. So he just thinks it. Fuck., that just feels right for these two.

And my apologies to Runner, but I didn't mind the interruption. But then maybe (like Runner) I'm hoping for a sequel?

[sempiternities]

Haha, it would be kind of random if that happened.

I've got zero ideas for a sequel, I'm afraid, but who knows when inspiration strikes. Your lovely comment made me a little more eager to write more Runner/Hoosier though, so thanks a lot!