Title: All the things we care about, part two | How whisperings engrave the skin
Pairing: Sledge/Snafu
Rating: R (to be sure for later chapters)
Disclaimer: The contents of this story are entirely fictional and they don’t concern the real men from World War II, but the actors. I don’t own anything.
Warnings: Minor spoilers for The Pacific.
A/N: Thanks
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That was amazing. Lovely writing! I like the uncertainty that you write between them.
‘This reading material of yours ain’t worth shit, boy,’ he said acidly.
Bonus points for 'analphabetism'! I can see Sledge using that to confuse Snafu, insulting him with words he probably doesn't know.
I almost died when he pointed the knife at Sledge's throat - that sense of danger is so characteristic for Snafu, though.
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Thanks so much for letting me beta and I look forward to the next part!
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The changes you made were very helpful, they really improved the chapter a lot.
So I'm delighted to have you as my beta! :D
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WOW, just Wow!
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Don't hold that breathe for too long, your brilliant brain deserves all the oxygen it can get! ;)
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