the walls came tumbling down

Dec 26, 2010 23:23

Title: the walls came tumbling down
Rating: PG
Pairing: Dean/Sam, Dean/Sampala
Warnings: incest, but only barely; spoilers up through 6.11
Word Count: 1325
Summary: This is my Christmas present to ace_of_spades6. She asked me for Dean/Sampala, and then my brain kind of ran away with me.

A/N: I hope this is what you wanted, bb. I'm pretty happy with how it ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pairing:sam/dean

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abeautifullie3 January 9 2011, 01:33:08 UTC
This was utterly absurd! But...yet...IDEFK! Somehow you made it...work?
Last night, as I read it, I was full-blown sobbing. Now today, I'm still trying to wrap my head around it, and honestly all I can do is applaud you and say job well done!

Such a casual and easy flowing writing style, that welcomes you to settle into the story. And a plot that shouldn't work, or at the least come out all kinds of cracky, yet it's sweet, and heartbreaking, and really packs a punch!

Thank you for writing & sharing!

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semperama January 10 2011, 22:09:31 UTC
Wow, this comment make me feel so good! I'm really glad that it worked for you, despite the somewhat absurd plot, haha. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

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abeautifullie3 January 12 2011, 21:41:22 UTC
You're quite welcome!

I hope you don't mind, but I recc'd this on my journal today. I'm thinking recc'ing is always a good thing, but should you want me to take it down for any reason, please just ask. ;-}

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semperama January 13 2011, 00:40:46 UTC
I don't mind at all! Thank you so much. That's so sweet of you. :)

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semperama January 10 2011, 22:14:35 UTC
Thank you so much! That is such a compliment, as I know there are a lot of good resouling fics out there. I'm glad this one managed to connect with you. :)

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maraceles January 10 2011, 21:50:50 UTC
Oh, this made me cry. Awesome fic.

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semperama January 10 2011, 22:15:31 UTC
Thank you so much! I hope it didn't make you TOO sad. :)

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cammie_bluesky January 11 2011, 18:26:27 UTC
This hit me harder than I expected. Especially the last part where it really hits Dean that he will never see Sam again. Never see his smile again, never touch him, or smell him or feel him. That brought tears to my eyes but it is better than nothing.

Wonderful.

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semperama January 13 2011, 00:36:19 UTC
The fact that it's better than nothing is part of what makes it sad, I think. They have to settle for less. :( I'm glad you liked it though. Thanks so much for your comment!

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missyjack January 13 2011, 08:19:39 UTC
heartbreaking and awesome

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semperama January 13 2011, 17:57:24 UTC
Thank you so much!

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