Medium - Beyond appearances (1/?)

[semisweetsoul]

Title: Beyond Appearances - Chapter 1
Author: semisweetsoul
Fandom: Medium
Characters: Allison/Joe, Ariel, Bridgette and Marie, Scanlon & Devalos.
Rating: PG - 13
Prompt: lip sync @ tamingthemuse
Summary: It's a question of instincts, maternal instinct, woman instinct, and medium instinct.
Word Count: 915
Disclaimer: I don’t own the show I’m just writing about it. This is

Comments

[crazyboltonlass]

I hadn't noticed this one! :) You have me intrigued. You already know I love your depictions of the Dubois family, you always get them spot on for me. :)

One little thing, her curiosity picked Did you mean peaked or piqued here? I''ve heard both. I think the latter is more correct though.

I got news that Medium will be shown on a channel that I can watch today, albeit not the first runs. I think I'll still be naughty!

[semisweetsoul]

Oh! Sorry for the late answer. Actually, this idea was just silly until the full plot developed in my mind, but being for a challenge I was running out of time. Therefore I decided to slip it up. I've tried to finish it ever since, but I'm a bit stuck so, I'll see what I can do.

I've just edited it. It must be quite different from when you read it, it's a bit longer, and I've had time to make changes and check for grammar and structure with fresh eyes. If you read it again, now, or when I post chapter 2, feel free to point out any mistakes I've made, it's my biggest fear.

Thanks for reading by the way. ;)

[crazyboltonlass]

No worries, I only found it when you mentioned about fic in your last entry. I'm going to add this community to my flist though! I'm only up to episode 3 of B&S, otherwise I would check out your fics for that too! :)

“Let me guess. You called the other two men in your life, and have an urgent meeting to solve your urgent case?” This makes me giggle, it's so something Joe would say.

I like the idea and should it all come together for you one day, I will definitely read. :) I don't notice any glaring mistakes. Sometimes I get muddled though because I'm used to British English.

Can I ask what episode you icon comes from?

[semisweetsoul]

First, you're watching Brothers & Sisters?! Beware! It's awfully addictive, if you feel like sharing your thoughts ;) PM me or leave a comment somewhere at my LJ!

Sometimes I get muddled though because I'm used to British English.
It's funny because we learn British English at school and university, but since the only way for us to actually listen to some English is movies ( and with the help of the Internet American TV series) most of us start to speak and even write in American English. I don't really know whether I do sound more American than British, somehow I try to write in the language of the show, in Medium's case, American.

I don't know what season my Medium icon is, I'd say probably late season 3, early season 4 if Al's haircut is any indication, check out my profile for the icon maker, visit their journal, you might find the original post. This reminds me I have a new Allison icon, I'm a bit Medium centric lately!

Next part coming up soon!