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Jun 27, 2009 17:03

Title: Birthday wish
Author: semisweetsoul
Rating: G
Prompt: #153 jet lag @ tamingthemuse
Summary: What happens when your dream comes true? You make another one.
Word Count: 939

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!original fiction, 2009, @ tamingthemuse, rating: g, original: one shot

Comments 2

darkspirited1 June 29 2009, 04:35:19 UTC

I really enjoyed that one. A job as flight attendant was a great choice! I really liked how you incorporated the prompt in there.

The only thing that really got to me was this line: I longed for being one of these people,

I think it's supposed to be: "I longed to be one of these people" (perhaps even those people)

Great job!

semisweetsoul June 29 2009, 17:37:47 UTC

Thanks for reading, sweets. I checked that verb, and my dictionary confirms what you tell me. I'll go correct it, thanks for pointing that out!

It's strange, though. I'm never sure of anything, checks everything twice to be sure, and I managed to overlook this one.

I was in deep trouble for this prompt, and suddenly Saturday morning this just *happened*. I'm glad how it turned out.