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Brothers & Sisters - Coming A Long Way, A Step In The Right Direction

Dec 14, 2011 21:30

Title: Coming A Long Way, A Step In The Right Direction
Author: semisweetsoul
Artist:chosenfire28
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 9,600 words
Pairing: Kevin Walker/Scotty Wandell
Characters: The Walkers, Bertha Wandell, Wally Wandell
Spoilers: Set during season 3, when Robert patronized Kevin in every single episode, when they went hunting together.

Summary: Scotty has a ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

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semisweetsoul December 17 2011, 16:08:38 UTC

Oh! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥ I didn't expect a comment so soon after posting the story. :)

The funny part is that I've never really liked Scotty, but I've always liked Bertha and tried to understand her personality and behavior. I'm really glad the dialog worked. It's always tricky with so many characters interacting to make it sound plausible and not too stilted.

The first Sarah & Kevin moment is one of my favorite parts of the story.

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semisweetsoul December 19 2011, 19:11:23 UTC

I used to ship Kevin/Jason, but the show destroyed their relationship. All fan girls out there seemed to worship Scotty but me! Ha! But since I can't seem to write anything that isn't canon, well, I had to try. It gave me the opportunity to explore Scotty's relationship with his folks a little more.

Thanks for your thoughts :)

marea67 December 17 2011, 19:10:45 UTC

Great story. Isn't Bertha a fascinating character? I just love that about her. I cannot really LIKE her, but I cannot DISlike her either... And it was too see that Kevin had the last word on her. ;)

I've missed your writing. :)

semisweetsoul December 18 2011, 19:32:20 UTC

Thank you :) I keep thinking that she had a great potential lost on bad storytelling. *sigh*

I like to think it's not resolved. It's kind of a semisweet end, don't you think? ;)

♥ ♥ ♥

yinyang077 December 19 2011, 20:15:56 UTC

nice one... Nightmares can be cruel poor scotty...hiding away his fears from kevin who is mr sherlock ...
Glad thy all ended up happy :)

yinyang077 December 19 2011, 20:16:55 UTC

btw i just adore the picture

semisweetsoul December 20 2011, 16:50:47 UTC

Thanks. Yes, Kevin should be a detective, he just has to know everything.

And if you like the art, let the artist know, her post is here.

sexycazzy January 15 2012, 02:14:42 UTC

A lovely story! :-)

semisweetsoul January 15 2012, 17:48:19 UTC

Thank you very much!