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Brothers & Sisters - Party Time

Aug 01, 2009 19:16

Title: Party Time
Author: semisweetsoul
Characters: Mostly, Sarah, Nora, Kitty & Kevin.
Rating: PG
Prompt: barbeque @ tamingthemuse
Summary: Back from Mexico, Nora feels like celebrating.
Spoilers: 3.24 - Mexico.
Word Count: 1,146
Disclaimer: Not mine ;)
A/N: This is dialogue only, a little experiment, which I hope will work for you. :)

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2009, @ tamingthemuse, rating: g, the walkers, !fan fiction, fandom: brothers & sisters

Comments 6

lonelywalker August 1 2009, 20:05:13 UTC

*dies*

Oh, I love this. You have Nora down perfectly.

semisweetsoul August 2 2009, 14:44:22 UTC

Hee! I love Nora! The real challenge for me was Sarah, I just hope she was okay;)

marea67 August 7 2009, 21:04:42 UTC

loved it! I love Nora, can't help it. :)

semisweetsoul August 8 2009, 15:07:46 UTC

Thank you! Nora is easy, Sarah's not!

adishatz August 12 2009, 20:44:46 UTC

Liked it! Great job!

I've been interrupted while reading this and then, when I went back where I stopped, it was difficult to know "who is saying what". But I re-read it once alone and then I had no problem... :)

semisweetsoul August 13 2009, 16:52:02 UTC

Thanks, I love to try new things. It's insane how dialogue comes easily compared to prose, so it was nice to take a fun moment to have characters talk instead of going inside their heads, and trying to describe their emotions.