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#110: Finding El Dorado

Aug 26, 2016 13:00

From: thehappypanda

Title: Finding El Dorado
Rating: PG
Word Count: 6,300
Summary: In which Prince Sehun and his study companion find their way to El Dorado with some help from magic powers.
Warning/s: N/A

( Luhan glanced back at the castle that he’s known since childhood and etched every tower and turret into the recesses of his mind. )

round 5, 2016, fic, rating: pg, length: 5k-10k

Comments 7

anonymous August 26 2016, 17:52:08 UTC

What a great journey! It was nice following them, I felt like I was there too. I wished it was longer though, so yes, I'd like to hear about this world. I really like it.

anonymous August 27 2016, 06:07:51 UTC

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL I'M CRYING

anielluicca August 29 2016, 09:17:45 UTC

aww, this is really cute~ i really enjoyed reading this and i'd love to read more from this au :D
thank you for sharing your wonderful work *hugsyou* :')

freeza_lj August 29 2016, 12:14:39 UTC

*cough cough* Hello, I'm the one who prompted this and I really enjoyed it. <3
(It is what I've been looking for.)
I highly approve of this AU! (~>_>)~

I love the world that you build up. It was all coming to life in front of my inner eye.
I understand what you mean by saying you had a time problem (I know what you're talking about XD). I guess that if you would have had more time you could have expanded that even more, because this AU holds a lot of potential.
I also really liked the twist that you built in with Sehun. Didn't see that coming.
HunHan's relationship was also very cute; gave me tons of fluffy OTP feels. ^^

If you want to write spin-offs or sequels or make it longer or whatever you plan to do, I would also approve, because like I said, you can do a lot with this very good idea. ^^

Thank you for writing this. <3

almadcuervo September 2 2016, 04:24:52 UTC

Such a nice story!! I would love to read more about this world, you should definitely write a sequel or something.