This is perfection, I cannot express how much I love your writing style. I finish reading at one go, and now I'm crying my eyes out. Thank you for writing and I just want to say your selu is beautiful. Good job!!
oh wow. i don't even know how to comment properly for this story you've written because there were so many points while reading this where i had to pause because of the feelings evoked through your detailed descriptions of Luhan's inner thoughts and emotions. there are so many beautiful imagery that contrasts the darkness that consumes Luhan and it's very well written! i have to be honest and say that the way the story took an unexpected twist towards the end was rather shocking because i never saw it coming? i thought shi xun would just be forcefully removed from luhan's life because of his responsibilities and background, but for him to be his half brother i was just :O! this story made me smile and get teary-eyed all the way and yeah, really appreciate your hard work in writing this for us and all the details put into it.
there are too many parts in this story that i love, but i'm choosing just one because this:
There is a time for everything in this world-a time for love, a time for education, a time for happiness
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I think I might know who wrote this. However, it doesn't really matter.
While reading (and crying) I kept thinking how unfair fate is for those who suffer through all their lives. Those who treasure every shimmer of happiness they encounter as if it was their last. Those who think they do not even deserve happiness at all and so choose to sacrifice themselves for the happiness of others. And it hurt so bad.
This wonderful round of selubration, this prompt and the amazing author who decided to claim it and write such a lovely, interesting and just perfect piece of art.. Made me realize we could all just be kinder. We could all choose to donate shimmers of happiness to those persons who are instead awfully wounded by sadness. And we should.
Just when you thought things couldn't get worse well turns out they can. I could almost laugh at how Zitao comes back and finds out what happened. I mean you'd think the worst that could happen is that they'd have to break up but no PAIN KNOWS NO LIMITS.
Poor Lu and poor Hun. If I was their dad I'll just let them be I mean who cares if they're siblings. It's not like they knew.
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there are too many parts in this story that i love, but i'm choosing just one because this:
There is a time for everything in this world-a time for love, a time for education, a time for happiness ( ... )
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While reading (and crying) I kept thinking how unfair fate is for those who suffer through all their lives. Those who treasure every shimmer of happiness they encounter as if it was their last. Those who think they do not even deserve happiness at all and so choose to sacrifice themselves for the happiness of others. And it hurt so bad.
This wonderful round of selubration, this prompt and the amazing author who decided to claim it and write such a lovely, interesting and just perfect piece of art.. Made me realize we could all just be kinder. We could all choose to donate shimmers of happiness to those persons who are instead awfully wounded by sadness. And we should.
To whoever wrote this, thank you.
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Poor Lu and poor Hun. If I was their dad I'll just let them be I mean who cares if they're siblings. It's not like they knew.
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