I'll Just Wait

Aug 14, 2010 11:58

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lorele August 15 2010, 23:02:54 UTC
Wow. This could be me, this could be my mother, this could be the ideal hope. This is beautiful. It's acknowledging the karmic cycle/loop of samsara, "walking the wheel", but it's also a slowing-down of it, rather than just jumping in, she chooses to extoll the virtue of patience... and being the off-beat one, I like how you play even the angels as challenged, amused, and in awe of it. This is beautifully done.

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lacruciverbiste August 16 2010, 14:43:31 UTC
Nice use of the prompt this week. Very creative and poignant.

Good luck in the polls this week! Look forward to reading more from you.
~Kate
BF Week 2 Entry: “Lazy river”

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keytobias5 August 18 2010, 23:47:56 UTC

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