I like how you spent a lot of time on Jesse and Carol. It really fleshed out his character, in particular, very well. The background bits about the freshness of zombies and how it affect their vision and hearing were excellent. I enjoyed reading it very much. Nice, nice work.
I'm really glad you like this story. The irony is, this world developed with Priest, but I think Jesse is a really good character. I may have to rework this place.
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I may continue Priest and Jesse's story, but not for next week. Hands just isn't screaming zombie to me. I don't know why, fickle muse.
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Can't wait to read more!
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I like how you spent a lot of time on Jesse and Carol. It really fleshed out his character, in particular, very well. The background bits about the freshness of zombies and how it affect their vision and hearing were excellent. I enjoyed reading it very much. Nice, nice work.
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