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vyvyan_wilde October 25 2009, 20:57:55 UTC
I love zombie stories, and this was excellent! I really liked the suspense and the strong character of Jesse.
Can't wait to read more!

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selkie_queen October 25 2009, 22:21:24 UTC
Thanks, I think Jesse may have a more important part in Priest's world now that I've created him.

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rephen October 27 2009, 13:13:10 UTC
Oh, zombie fic. Tasty :D

I like how you spent a lot of time on Jesse and Carol. It really fleshed out his character, in particular, very well. The background bits about the freshness of zombies and how it affect their vision and hearing were excellent. I enjoyed reading it very much. Nice, nice work.

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selkie_queen October 27 2009, 16:51:27 UTC
I'm really glad you like this story. The irony is, this world developed with Priest, but I think Jesse is a really good character. I may have to rework this place.

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selkie_queen October 28 2009, 15:00:26 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I may continue Priest and Jesse's story, but not for next week. Hands just isn't screaming zombie to me. I don't know why, fickle muse.

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