The Nulls

[selkie_queen]

Comments

[pipisafoat]

Very cool. I enjoyed reading this - good luck this week!

[selkie_queen]

Thank you, I love to entertain.

[____hejira]

I like this a lot. It's absolutely unique. I see the two sections as exposition, then story. I wonder if you could find a way to work the exposition more seamlessly into the story rather than making it it's own event. Exposition is necessary, especially for these kind of things that the general population has little context for, but it is possible to meld the two together to flow better. Just some thoughts. I enjoyed reading this though. Good luck.

[selkie_queen]

Thanks, I know, I'm trying to get my explainations in better. I've been writing a book and it requires many explainations of the world. I'm hoping in the next few challenges my writing can improve.