Happy birthday to mere-ubu

Sep 01, 2008 19:11

Pressie for you, oh enthusiastic one. Hope you don't mind that it's a bit warm?

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fiction, spuffy, smut

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*supersquee* mere_ubu September 1 2008, 17:35:00 UTC
Mmm, why, no! *fans self* I don't mind that it's warm at all. ;)

Can you see me 'ere in the shadows, my golden queen - pale as moonlight worshippin' the sun.

Aw, I love this! I can see everything go clearly. There can never be enough Spuffy fic wherein the two of them simply get to have fun with each other. And if anyone ever deserved a holiday and some serious relaxation, it's poor S7 Buffy.

Thank you so much for thinking of me! *hugs* Hope you have a wonderful day, lady! :D

ETA that I will evermore think of S7 as the Lame-o War Against the Super-Morphin' First. Hee!

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Re: *supersquee* selinde2 September 3 2008, 01:40:43 UTC
So glad you enjoyed it. And glad you picked up on the lame-o war. :~)) I wasn't feeling brave about posting this at all...

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Re: *supersquee* mere_ubu September 3 2008, 03:47:11 UTC
We're getting a lot of second-hand rain today courtesy of Hurricane Gustav, and I re-read at work today--the perfect sunny antidote to this foul weather. :)

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Re: *supersquee* selinde2 September 3 2008, 08:38:51 UTC
:~) I don't suppose you're glad to see it, but I'm glad you're getting some rain. At least the dams will be full.

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rebcake September 2 2008, 18:15:51 UTC
Oh, very nice. A lovely, detailed portrait of a day we all wish they could have had. And, while Spike's "lounge chair" talk is, um, exciting, his silences are even more so.

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Thank you so much selinde2 September 2 2008, 23:50:24 UTC
I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Silences, hm? Shall try to add more of those...

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Re: Thank you so much rebcake September 3 2008, 00:13:00 UTC
I just meant to say that you left in enough "breathing room", which adds a nice sense of anticipation and dynamism to your scene. It's certainly not a crit of any kind. Stay the course!

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Re: Thank you so much selinde2 September 3 2008, 01:43:03 UTC
Not at all! And I wouldn't have minded if you did want to concrit - writing can be so solitary. Which may have advantages of course. Those silences were spaces for me to *fan self*. You've just given me an idea is all. :~))

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