Pet.

[selfish_cry]

Title: Pet.
Author: niela_xxx
Pairing: Whiplasher/Cat.
Rating: NC-17.
POV: 3rd person.
Summary: Eric doesn't understand himself sometimes; he doesn't get why those things turn him on so much. But Andreas gives him what he needs, and it makes up for the moments when Andreas crosses the line and pushes the limits too much.
Disclaimer: I do NOT own Whiplasher

Comments

[fictionallies]

::hail: ::hail:

I saw that you'd posted this while I was at school and oh it was sososo tempting to read it then, but it's probably a good thing I didn't. ::shifty2: ::tehe:

I love Kitten in this, homg. I love how you go into his head rather than just leaving it at actions. You've written it amazingly and gah I just love it.

Amazing awesome fantabulous job, lovey. ::arms: ::arms:

[selfish_cry]

Thank you, love! I tried to put the reasoning behind it, and sort of try to explain that even if the actions are wanted and welcome, there is a line that can be, and sometimes is, crossed. And that the relationship is complex, you know? Pluses and minuses. And I ramble. Anyway. Thanks again. :D

[m_artsa]

[selfish_cry]

Wow. Thanks, sweetheart, that's what I have been trying to achieve (well, to get in Kitten's head, not to make you blush :P). ♥

[m_artsa]

[joothemoo]

:x The ending was great. After reading the whole thing, that sentence at the end is like a total climax of the... emotions or how to call it. Like... for being a good pet... your candy is that you can suck me off.

Well written! I mean the grammar, syntax, vocab, all the stuff, it flows very naturally and it's easy to read plus keeps the reader interestedd and pulled into the story.

The idea with the leash was great. I liked how you built the story, from just innocent situation, through intriguing odd description of how Eric's room is the bedroom and stuff, the the surprising turning point where andy takes him out for a walk like a pet.

The situation with policemen, i'm not so sure about that one, :P if i were a policemen... i'd probalby think andy is a freak (even more so when eric cries) and do something about it. :P

The 'sex' scene was ~~ disturbingly good.

Their relationship in this fic is so twisted xDD

[joothemoo]

ps. fave quotes are hard to pic, because as i've said, it's really well written