Bad Influence.

[selfish_cry]

Title: Bad Influence.
Author: niela_xxx
Pairing: Whiplasher/Cat (Deathstars) - kinda?.
Rating: PG.
POV: 3rd person.
Summary: Andreas loves his work. He has a quiet place to read and sometimes it's fun, too.
Disclaimer: I do NOT own neither Cat, nor Whiplasher, or anyone from Deathstars. I'm in no contact with them, I mean no harm with this, I don't get

Comments

[selfish_cry]

FC for Cary! *cackles evily* >.>

[egoemopunk]

i love you xD <33333333333333333333333333

[niela_xxx]

I love you too. <33

[niela_xxx]

thank you! of corpse noone can say no to him, and if someone does, it's just that they don't know better. :P

awwwh. this makes me lol so much. I'm not Cat, I'm quite sure about that. though I'd love to be - I'd get regular sex with Andy then! :D

awww it's fine, your comment made me smile. I love you too! <3

[joothemoo]

MMMM i liked this story mostly because of how suggestive it was in giving mental images - your descriptions of Cat.

He liked his job - he got money for having a quiet place to read book in and occasionaly selling cigarettes or booze to people. - I love the Andy this introduces. Hah the mental image of that sexy beast sittingin a shop and reading books while waiting for customers is irresistable

he watched him walk to the counter, swaying his hips while pushing his sunglasses up into his hair that looked so messy Andreas coud guess the guy spent hours to make it look like that. Once he reached the counter, he leaned forward. ”Hey,“ he literally purred, resting his hands on the counter, his bracelet making a soft, tingling noise when coming into contact with the counter surface.
- perfect description of Cat. that whole paragraph was just perfect, i loved the whole mental image it gave

his eyes shining mischieviously and all his appearence sending a message of I'm-the-god-get-out-of-my-way - the same goes in case of this one

[niela_xxx]

really? I didn't think you'd like it, cause it's... yeah. nothing special. :P thanks though. ^^

pshh Andy totally fits in the booze shop where he would read all day/night/whatever long. <3 and yay. I love writing Cat. :D especially drama!queen!narcissistic!bitch!Cat. ^-^

lol what did you not get about it? no sex, drama!queen!Cat storms out of the shop to get booze elsewhere and leaves amused!Andy behind.

[joothemoo]

I love the image of reading Andy :D

what I didnt get is - "Just perfect." Andy obviously thinks that for a reason ... it actually gives depth to this. A mini but still psychological detail of Andy.

[niela_xxx]

well he finds his job perfect. like, except for having place to read, he has amusing things happen to him, which make his job just perfect.

[lady_thunder]

Cat's potty mouth tendecies made me giggle. I get flustered on things like this XD XD.
It was very funny and very well written....and it's so Andi to sell booze to a minor, and so Eric to try seduce someone to get what he wants. Good job! =)

[niela_xxx]

thank you! ahhh yeah, they fit, hm? I'm glad it made you laugh, that was the main point. ^^

[fruityahren]

Hehehe. Amused!Andy rocks. I like the way that you wrote this little diddy - to the point but still discriptive.

Such a treat to come home too, so thanks.

[niela_xxx]

Thank you! It was just a short something, true, but I'm working on something longer. ^^