The writing recently has planed off in good ways, but the challenges remain.
The Short Story Collection: The TOC of Down These Secret Paths stands tighter with a more reasonable flow for the stories, at least as group-things
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re: FoSTG--Definitely in this case. It takes away many passive situations, redirects, and amplifies them. And by taking that one Act 3 piece and rearranging it, parallel plots are now cemented in a much more logical manner.
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