Harry Potter - The Black Pearl: Chapter Two

[self_preserving]

Rating: Mature
Warning/s: Torture, Incest, Graphic Sex
Pairing: Bellatrix Lestrange/Rodolphus Lestrange
Word Count: 4,765
Summary: Bellatrix Lestrange's desperate need to have a child leads her into the ever consuming darkness of insanity. As she races towards her ultimate demise, with Voldemort's faith in her fading fast, she is forced to question

Comments

[self_preserving]

Wow, thank you so much. That means a lot, Tash. I'm glad you're enjoying it and that you think it all fits is great. I was so paranoid with this chapter, it had to be just right or it wouldn't be believable. So I'm really glad it works.

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[bossladydewitt]

OMG!! This is amazing.

I absolutely love the way you characterized Druella and I am really interested in how Narcissa deals with things down the road. (I imagine this conversation is going to be eating away at her.)

[self_preserving]

YAY! I'm glad you like it, I finally got it down pat. Narcissa's guilt is going to play heavily throughout the story. So don't worry, you'll see it.

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[kachingkaching]

Okay, first I have to say that I read parts of the next chapter before this chapter was finished, so I read what was going to happen even before I 'got to know' Druella, before I knew how exactly you'd portray her and how you'd write what she was to do to her eldest daughter. I was aware of the fact that this chapter was going to be hard to read and I can only say that it had the expected effect on me

[kachingkaching]

I forgot to mention that you're stressing the fact that Narcissa's always been Druella's favourite. With that, you emphasize that Druella's had a different view on Narcissa. Another interesting thing, just saying ...

[I really hate LJ sometimes. Y CAN'T I EDIT MY POSTS?! Y CAN'T I EDIT MY PICTURE? Well yeah.. w/e. 8D]