Doctor Who - Time After Time: Part Five

Feb 24, 2010 09:53

Title: Time After Time
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters of Dr Who or The Sarah Jane Adventures
Pairing/s: Tenth Doctor/Sarah Jane Smith, Liz Shaw/Brigadier Lethbridge-Stewart
Rating: Teen
Summary: A call to return brings more then the Doctor bargained for.
Author's Note: Let me just say, the title for this part was going to be the title for the ( Read more... )

show: doctor who, character: liz shaw, show: the sarah jane adventures, character: brigadier lethbridge-stewart, character: martha jones, character: luke smith, warning: character death, character: the doctor - x, type: fan fiction, character: sarah jane smith

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spydurwebb February 23 2010, 23:11:16 UTC
OK, so I thought, "In bloody Aberdeen..." was the best line ever...until I got to:

“Considering I’ve been dead for a couple of days I’m feeling pretty good,”

This is priceless stuff! Intense, but hmmm.

And it brings up so many questions - What about Lavinia, was she a Time Lord too? So Barbara stole a body, like the Master, but how did that effect her remaining regenerations? Is she secretly still out there? Oh, thought...perhaps Lavinia WAS Barbara after regenerating when Eddie died.

Ooo, spazzing out Sarah, very good. Um, someone been channeling a little "Hand of Fear"? ;-)

Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

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self_preserving February 23 2010, 23:17:24 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

Hmm Lavinia... indeed. There are many questions there.

I may have channelled "Hand of Fear" there yes. :P

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spydurwebb February 23 2010, 23:19:15 UTC
I can't imagine why you would've considered Hand of Fear as a source for violence...it's just incomprehensible to me. ;-)

I ask lots of questions, you should know this by now. :-)

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self_preserving February 23 2010, 23:31:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm enjoying working it all out. It's quite fun.

The Doctor's not going to know what to do with a Sarah Jane that can match him thought for thought. Though I could definitely suggest a few things....

I'm really glad you're enjoying it ♥

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sleepismyfriend February 24 2010, 04:05:18 UTC
Fix my Sarah Jane right now! *stamps foot*

And, just thought I'd add for emphasis... "LICKING TIME!" *runs away*

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self_preserving February 24 2010, 04:10:24 UTC
Your Sarah, is it? The Doctor may have a thing or two to say about that.

YOU. YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO YELL THAT IN PUBLIC.

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persiflage_1 February 24 2010, 06:29:42 UTC
Ouch, poor Sarah. I rather imagine Liz and Martha are going to be bolting through that door in a moment, and the Doctor's going to be on the receiving end of a strong telling off!

The Sarah-as-Time-Lord backstory is intriguing, particularly one considers Aunt Lavinia.

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self_preserving February 24 2010, 06:34:42 UTC
Poor Sarah indeed. Wouldn't want to be clocked on the chin by a Time Lord... then again wouldn't be as bad when you are one yourself. There's definitely going to be words exchanged about this, but I don't know if Liz and Martha will be in any condition to bolt anywhere.

Thank you indeed. Aunt Lavinia definitely deserves some consideration, the backstory poses quite a few questions in regards to her.

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persiflage_1 February 24 2010, 06:37:38 UTC
Why would Liz and Martha not be in a position to bolt? They're not sick, are they?

I am deeply curious about Aunt Lavinia!

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self_preserving February 24 2010, 06:43:10 UTC
On both counts, you'll have to wait and see. ;)

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recycledcans May 26 2010, 05:32:03 UTC
So, I was looking through youhr other fics after reading five men river killed, and this story is really really good. I know its been a few months, but I hope you plan to continue it.

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self_preserving May 26 2010, 05:56:49 UTC
Thank you very much. ♥

I know it's been a while. My grandfather passed away a few days after I posted this and it's taken me a while to get back into writing in general. But I have been working on the next chapter, so hopefully it'll be up soon. ;)

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recycledcans May 26 2010, 16:28:53 UTC
You're welcome. I really like the way you write the characters and move the plot along.

I'm sorry for your loss, by the way.

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