Doctor Who - Time After Time: Part Three

Jan 16, 2010 17:48

Title: Time After Time
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters of Dr Who or The Sarah Jane Adventures
Pairing/s: Tenth Doctor/Sarah Jane Smith, Liz Shaw/Brigadier Lethbridge-Stewart
Rating: Teen
Summary: A call to return brings more then the Doctor bargained for.

Rest assured if we had known that regeneration was possible we wouldn’t have gone ahead with the funeral. )

show: doctor who, character: liz shaw, show: the sarah jane adventures, character: brigadier lethbridge-stewart, character: martha jones, character: luke smith, warning: character death, character: the doctor - x, type: fan fiction, character: sarah jane smith

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persiflage_1 January 16 2010, 10:54:31 UTC
Poor Sarah Jane. Her mind must be seriously boggled, never mind anyone else's!

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self_preserving January 16 2010, 11:12:39 UTC
YAY I was waiting for your comment.

Yes indeed, unfortunately she wouldn't be our Sarah Jane if she didn't worry about everyone else so it's a good thing Liz is there to make her focus. ;)

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persiflage_1 January 16 2010, 11:18:01 UTC
Sorry - I was wrangling with my recalcitrant laptop for a good couple of hours earlier this morning, so it took me a while to get to this.

Oh yes, that's SJ all over - worry about everyone except herself. (She and Martha are much alike in that respect. In Martha's case it's her natural empathy, which, of course, is what makes her such a good doctor.)

Are we going to get a scene from the Doctor's PoV where the Brig's trying to keep him busy while Liz and Sarah Jane are upstairs? (I have visions of Ten pacing around the kitchen while the Brig tries to ply him with tea!)

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self_preserving January 16 2010, 11:48:51 UTC
Lol it's okay it's not like you should feel obliged to comment. :P

Oh now interesting, I actually didn't think of that. I was going to stick with Sarah Jane... but you know what I'm going to do that now. Oh that's very interesting indeed. *kisses your head* Thank you!

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almosee January 16 2010, 12:10:33 UTC
Wow, this fic is really interesting. I really hope you decide to continue it, because I cannot wait to see where you go :D

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self_preserving January 16 2010, 22:10:31 UTC
Thank you, and don't worry I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. ♥

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shadowturquoise January 16 2010, 18:47:09 UTC
Oh wow! I really love this and can't wait to see where you take it.

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self_preserving January 16 2010, 22:11:24 UTC
Thank you very much. Hopefully it won't take that lon till the next chapter is up. ♥

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boro_girl January 16 2010, 23:38:28 UTC
Oooo... So this is what you were talking about? I like the idea, very interesting. Can't imagine how weird it was for Sarah - not least of all the fact that she woke up in her own coffin. Thanks for the nightmares I will now have tonight. ;)

So much to deal with, so many questions. Looking forward to the answers.

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self_preserving January 16 2010, 23:44:53 UTC
Oh yeah it was a slight horror to write, considering I suffer from taphephobia which is the fear of being buried alive. (I watched the episode of Crossing Jordan where she gets buried alive before school once and my friends called my Mum when the bus got to the second stop because I was having a panic attack.)

Answers are going to be fun. I hope. My mind can think of odd things.

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boro_girl January 16 2010, 23:50:06 UTC
I'm severely claustrophobic myself - thank you cousins for shoving me into a box and piling enough old carpet on the top so it collapsed... :/ Gave me shivers just to think about it.

I like it when odd things happen - makes it all the more interesting. Stuff that's predictable bores me. I sadly seem to have a gift for spotting twists in stories (I'm no longer allowed to watch murder mysteries with the parents as I can totally spot the killer from the start) so the weirder the better. Like the fact that she's regenerated but not quite in the way we'd expect.

Random : when I typed the word regenerated I heard it in my head in Lis' voice from School Reunion.

I. Need. Help.

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self_preserving January 17 2010, 00:27:41 UTC
COUSINS FAIL. I was locked in my Great Grandmother's wardrobe with her fur coats. Which resulted in epic fear of furs. Which I'm completely okay with.

And omg we should watch murder mysteries together. When I was little I used to watch Murder She Wrote with my Nan and I'd always guess who it was the second they appeared on screen. And I still do it.

I decided that maybe if she regenerated without knowing she could (seeing Romana made it clear they can influence how they look) then she'd just look like her younger self, though maybe a few personality traits have changed we'll see.

Oh I totally heard Lis' voice too now.

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ms_rubiks January 17 2010, 10:50:52 UTC
This is awesome. Looking forward to the next chapter :-)assuming you write one that is...

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self_preserving January 17 2010, 13:28:00 UTC
Thank you so much, glad you're enjoying it. Don't worry there will be another couple of chapters at least. ;)

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