[KHR]XS - Noir - Chapter 4 - The Sound of Waves

[seleniasan]

Title: Noir
Title of the chapter: Chapter 4 - The Sound of the Waves
Author: seleniasan
Fandom: Kateikyoushi Hitman Reborn!
Pairing: Xanxus x Squalo
Rating: PG 15
Genre: crossover, AU
Summary: http://seleniasan.livejournal.com/79890.html
Notes: this chapter is unbeta-ed, I really hope there aren't

Comments

[yue_blanche]

well well well a new chapter and I was really curious how you manage xanxus getting the first one killed since mireille was kinda doing the flirt thing XDDD

the chapter itself is creatively written.but creativily written DOWN. although there are action scenes it kinda seems like everything was written down in a minute. no action while reading it no proper describing of their features while doing what they do.

but, you are talented and I am glad that after all you found the time of writing this. I am glad that xs hasn´t died in you ;A;

[seleniasan]

Thank you!
Well, this is a period where I don't have any spare time at all, I'm stuck between my last exams and my graduation thesis, I'm sorry^^; Next chapter will be better for sure! When I'm more calm from the point of view of my studying, I'll redo this chapter too! Thank you for your advices, they're very important!

XS never dies in me:3 Even though my OTP is SD, XS has a special place in my heart too!<3

[seleniasan]

Today I've managed to rewrite chapter 4, since I had a couple of hours of free time... It just needs to be beta-read^^; For chapter 5 it's begun, but currently I have an exam in a few days and I can't write too much:3