*hands out tissue*

Jun 15, 2006 07:23

My only warning? Everyone knows how The Iliad ends.

Title: Beloved ~ Chapter Forty-seven

Author: Sel selene_vidae

Pairing: Apollo/Paris, Hector/Paris

Summary: What if all that we believed to have been true - was not?

Rating: R for mentions of much, much violence.

Disclaimer: These characters belong to history, to myth, to legend. I make absolutely no ( Read more... )

hectorparis, apollo/paris, fic, beloved, multi-chapter

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pellawethiel June 15 2006, 00:28:06 UTC
Hi, I've been reading your stories for a while but have been too shy to comment on them! *shame* But anyway...
Butbutbutbut....for some reason I didn't see it coming! This story is great despite the periodic suspenseful waits. The nuances and details are vivid yet not overly specific. I love the humanity of the interactions between the characters and the general feeling of the story itself. Oh, whatever, I just love it in general! Nice job with this chapter and the story in general!

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selene_vidae June 16 2006, 11:40:57 UTC
Oh, sweetie, you never have to feel shy around me! I promise that I don't bite... unless you want me to, though. And only if you ask really nice. :P I'm just your regular nutters slash fiend. *winks*

Asfor this... It's my first love and my epic fic - despite tinanialilli calling all my fics epic ones. This has taken more than a year to write and I'm hoping to finish it somewhere in the near future. Amd the suspenseful waits? It's to keep you all on the edge of your toes. ;)

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tinanialilli June 17 2006, 01:43:14 UTC
Your fics are epic!!!! They put us all to shame!!!!!

*tacklesnuggs you cos I wuvs you so*

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galor5 June 15 2006, 02:12:26 UTC
Jeebus!

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selene_vidae June 16 2006, 11:41:58 UTC
... whoops?

*gives you cookie dough flavored ice cream as comfort food*

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peaches_74 June 15 2006, 02:19:06 UTC
*wails* Oh, Hector... *stifles a sob* Beautifully written, my dear. I knew Hector's death was coming, but the way you wrote it was brilliant. The way you captured all the reactions was so real, it mirrored what I felt as I read them...the burning need for vengeance, the denial of what happened, the pain, horror and mind-numbing grief. *sniffle* I must admit, I was hoping Ares would show up in a blaze of glory and put a stop to Achilles' blood lust, but it wasn't in the cards this time. *waves "I luv Ares" flag feebly*

This chapter was well worth the wait. Bravo! *hugs*

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selene_vidae June 16 2006, 11:44:38 UTC
Oh no! No wailing! *gives you much, much love*

This was really hard to write. I was crying as I did it and I'm just pleased that it translated well for you. And Ares? Well, he'll sort of make up for it in latter chapters. *LOVES HER PEACHY*

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peaches_74 June 17 2006, 07:22:57 UTC
*clutches my Ares plushy* OK, I'll wait to see how Ares makes it up to me, erm, I mean Paris.

*basks in my Sellie's love*

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joygoddess June 15 2006, 08:12:24 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOO *wails and starts to cry* Even though I knew this was coming, I'm not ready. Poor Hector, poor Paris *cries*

As always, very good chapter. Hope more will follow. But in the meantime I will wait patiently and try to bribe you to write more *offers muffins and chocolate cookies*

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selene_vidae June 16 2006, 11:45:47 UTC
*cuddles you and huggles you tightly* No, no crying. It will be all right in the end, I promise. *snoggles muchly*

And bribing is always, always good. ;)

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alilacia June 15 2006, 08:57:37 UTC
I knew it was coming, but... *sobs*

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selene_vidae June 16 2006, 11:46:43 UTC
*cuddles and rocks you back and forth* It's okay, sweetie. It'll be okay.

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alilacia June 16 2006, 14:26:40 UTC
*cuddles tightly*

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