The Price Part 1

[selenay_x]

Title: The Price
Characters: Roslin/Zarek
Rating: MA for themes
Disclaimer: I don’t own them. I’d like to, but I don’t
Notes: Tom and Laura’s relationship starts badly
Spoilers: S1 - S3
Thanks to the wonderful dixgrl78 for beta and for making it read so much better with her suggestions

Ever since the arrival of the President, (or technically was she

Comments

[liverpool_ruth]

Very nicely written..... and I especially love the bits where Kara and Tyrol are concerned about Laura!!

well done honey bunch
Ruth

[selenay_x]

Thank you muchly - I'm glad you're liking. Am plotting your fic at the moment.

[caprica9]

Well written. Best line: “That’s not part of the deal.”

I haven't read the second part yet ... but I'm glad to know there is a sequel ... for more than the obvious reason that I like to read R/Z fics.

I'm so feeling for Zarek. I hope she'll forgive him, but at the same time I want the story to stay so realistic. It's somehow very easy to believe that Zarek is in love with Roslin, but more difficult the other way around. Frak Moore and his manipulation to make us believe that there is only one man for Laura! Especially since this man seems not able (or is unwilling) to handle the job. I've made a new (technical brilliant) A/R manipulation, but right now I don't feel like posting it anymore. Okay, I need some more R/Z ... I'm going to read part two.

[selenay_x]

Am happy you like the whole R/Z idea, I've always thought they had a lot in common and there was a lot of potential there.

Am looking forward to your new manip when you post it - though I prefer your R/Z icons etc. Not to mention the Roslin Adar ones. Shiny!

[mary_me11]

What are you doing?!? I never wanted Laura so badly to be with Zarek together before.

I feel so sorry for him. It must be very terrible to be in love with somebody and to get nothing in return.
This story is wonderful, so sad, touching, heartbreaking ……and very very well written.

[selenay_x]

Looks innocent and sooo happy that you are liking R/Z. Am doing mega happy dance. They have so much potential IMO.