Comments | selectivelyurie: Let Them Talk

selectivelyurie

Let Them Talk

Oct 08, 2008 17:11

Title: Let Them Talk [s/a]
Author: selectivelyurie
Beta: killinglocals in all her glory
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon
POV: Third
Summary: Everything is blurry, his entire body is shaking with endorphins, his thoughts are jumbled together and he’s scared but Ryan Ross wants to fuck him so everything is right with the world.
Disclaimer: Not real, never happened. Don’t own ( Read more... )

boysecks, s/a, otp, maddie fangirls this for some reason, fic

Comments 45

aprettyoddfever October 9 2008, 21:00:54 UTC

Oh wow. That was like one of the best pieces of slash I've ever read. Words can't describe how amazing this story is. It's so descriptive and perfectly written. Just, wonderful.

selectivelyurie October 9 2008, 23:53:08 UTC

tbh, I don't think I write slash all that well o.o but thank you for thinking the opposite :)

<333

aprettyoddfever October 10 2008, 01:05:32 UTC

Nonsense! You are just modest. Which is charming :]

silviasometimes October 10 2008, 01:46:54 UTC

This is gorgeous. I really loved how, in the beginning, it seemed almost voyeuristic. Maybe that's not exactly the right word, but... I loved how you made it seem that we were the stars watching in on them and how it felt like we were watching a little part of their secret from the outside and then, as the story progressed, we moved from feeling like we are outside of the car to inside and actually with~ them? Then there was the metaphor with the stars which I thought was gorgeous. I probably don't make much sense, haha, but I just adore how this was written! ♥

selectivelyurie October 10 2008, 02:12:40 UTC

um brb, cryin :')

i can't even begin to describe how happy i am that you understood the underlying message in this. like, quite frankly i'm speechless right now.

ily like ~whoa for this comment, btw.
<33333

/irrational emotional rant

silviasometimes October 10 2008, 04:31:48 UTC

Aw! I just recc'd this in my journal, haha. I'm not sure if anyone will read of click the link but yeah. =] I'm glad, seriously. ♥ Luvin' irrational emotional rants, ngl.

selectivelyurie October 10 2008, 13:11:29 UTC

y-you recc'd me? :'D you are like, seriously my favorite person ever.

tysm, bb

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selectivelyurie October 10 2008, 13:14:43 UTC

o hai thar u!
i'm so glad you liked it :)
i think you're amazing too

<3

oh_heckyeah October 10 2008, 11:46:59 UTC

:O
Wow.
Oh God, this was amazing?.. I don't even know what to say.
Wow.
Amazing is an understatement.
Just wow.

selectivelyurie October 10 2008, 13:20:10 UTC

awh, thank you!
<3

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selectivelyurie October 10 2008, 21:23:54 UTC

AKDJALFKJFASKDSAJ

I DID GO TO SCHOOL!
unlike some people i know >__>