"O" is for O'Neill

May 19, 2009 07:03


The Drill
My contributiton to the Janet Frasier Alpha-Bits Day.
Athor: Sela21k
Rating: Gen
Characters: Janet Frasier and Jack O'Neill
Spoilers: None
Words: 627
My letter was "O" for O'Neill and Operation (but I subsituted 'drill' as a type of operation.)

Summary: Sometimes a routine physical is more than what it seems

O'Neill Knew the drill )

fan fiction, fanfic

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sg_fignewton May 19 2009, 18:49:03 UTC
Very nice look at Janet looking at Jack. :)

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sela21k May 19 2009, 20:25:20 UTC

Thanks. I love the idea of the two of them fussing at each other.

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neiths_arrow May 19 2009, 19:44:44 UTC
I like how you had them both doing their job. Who knows why O'Neill manipulated the situation to have her as his doctor. I would be he intimidated everyone. How ironic that he didn't intimidate probaby the smallest person there.

Good read!

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sela21k May 19 2009, 20:29:35 UTC
Thank you. Seeing the bits and pieces of how he reacts in the imfirmary with the staff throughout the series started me on this idea. He's like a big kid sometimes and she the main one who could handle him.

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thraesja May 20 2009, 00:39:35 UTC
Hee! Love how well Janet knows Jack and can handle him. They clearly respect and admire each other here, and it's nice to see.

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sela21k May 20 2009, 03:24:56 UTC
I'm glad the mutual respect came across.

Thanks for the comment.

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suzannemarie May 20 2009, 17:08:02 UTC
Aw, I really like this. I've always that that there's a nice, subtle bond that exists between Jack and Janet and I think you captured it well.

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sela21k May 21 2009, 22:25:11 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. There is a common bond there from what I see as well. They both are charged with protecting the team.

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cnidarian May 21 2009, 14:40:27 UTC
I love the Jack and Janet dynamic! Nice work!

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sela21k May 21 2009, 22:27:27 UTC
Yep, she's the only one that's not in anyway afraid of him! He can't bully her but she can him and he respects that. I think it's great.

Thanks for the feedback.

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