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sekrit_omg

Fic post

Oct 13, 2013 08:50

Title: The Troubles
Rating: R-NC17
Pairing: Stan/Kyle
Summary: Saturday in the Marsh-Broflovski household.
Notes: This is a birthday fic for Paramecie aka brimbelle. It's a follow-up to this fic, which is a Kenny/Craig thing with a Stan/Kyle subplot. This story follows up on that Stan and Kyle a few years down the road. Paramecie is a sweetheart and an ( Read more... )

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brimbelle October 13 2013, 19:40:44 UTC

!!! asjbglf oh my god OK I was so excited when I saw the notification in my mails that you posted this and this is even better than what I was thinking about!
Everything in here is so great, I love everything. Annoying but adorable Noah, smartass and slightly arrogant Benji, and I laughed at Kyle being so needy and thinking about sex even while being with his children, because that's totally how I picture him to be in his forties (actually no, that's how I picture him all the time but especially in his forties).
Also Craig getting fat yep, can totally see that. That was nice to have a glimpse of what Craig, Bebe and Kenny have become, since Kenny's situation at the end of Keep On Doing What You Do wasn't enviable.
I'm always impressed by all the details you put in your fics, small details about each character that mean a lot and make your story all the more complete and convincing, like the reference to Stan's ancient hoarding habits, their first time in a bathroom stall, Stan going to step,...

Also :
“You’re all full of my come ( ... )

brimbelle October 13 2013, 19:42:53 UTC

(Hm I wrote that with so much enthusiasm that I forgot to check it with a translation website ... Hope I'm making sense anyway!)

sekrit_omg October 14 2013, 18:22:40 UTC

You make perfect sense! Your English is great, man, don't worry.

sekrit_omg October 14 2013, 18:38:10 UTC

I'm so so happy you like this! I rarely write things quickly so I was nervous about it but I'm really glad it seemed to work! I definitely think about Kyle being super horny all the time, and the show kind of supports this or at least gets you pointed in that direction, with the sex-addicts episode.

I hope it was a very happy birthday and that things are going all right for you these days.