[fic] of these vows unwritten 01/06

[sekichu]

Title:  Of These Vows Unwritten
Notes:  Original characters belong to Joanna and I; meant to be a series of snippets and oneshots featuring various aspects of love in honor of Valentine's Day (as this is a V-Day gift for Joanna), be they heartbreak, resolution, first kisses or confession.  The hard moments or soft glances, slow lovemaking or dark

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[misterdictator]

i am foaming at the mouth rn omg, seki!writing is the best writing :Q______ asdfghjkl;weruiosa, what a wonderful valentine's gift bb ;___; you are too good to me orz ;; (/wipes slobber off computer screen)

His smile is as she remembers; a bright song with straightforward chords, ever skipping jubilantly ahead without pause and without her. -- i always adore your metaphors. what a gorgeous line, it just perfectly conveys the most basic and essential aspect of their dynamic. mm, everything after this sentence is just as wonderful and awe-inspiring and breathtaking.

It stuns her that he can still chat as if there is nothing, but a table and two lattes between them. Sooyun knows better. There is an ocean of surrender that swirls in the hollow space of her collarbone, the strands of what if dusty and tangled on the spindle of fate, unspun and untouched. -- even though you don't describe something such as setting word-for-word like most people would, i can still clearly visualize the scene unfolding before me. and oh the imagery, how you

[misterdictator]

All that he would never know. -- and everything comes tumbling back down into the swirling abyss of what could have beens and what ifs. i almost feel like i'm falling myself.

Think of me sometimes. -- for some odd reason, i thought of pin's comment to kurumi in knt. he mentioned that even if the boy in question (kazehaya) doesn't return the feelings (since she had just confessed), he cannot help but think about that specific girl for the rest of the day. kihyun will mull over sooyun in his head for the rest of the week, replaying every little moment that she had with him in the not so distant past. he'll remember those tutoring sessions, the fangirl attacks, the food outings, all the times they spent together. he'll wonder if he would have always seen her as a good friend or if he could have seen her as more, he'll wonder if he would have fallen for her if mink had never existed or if he had simply moved on from mink. he'll wonder about what kind of future he might have had with sooyun and i guess in short, he would re-evaluate his