Have You Seen This Man? - Chapter 1

Sep 27, 2010 22:36

Title: Have You Seen This Man?
Rating: T
Genre: Romance/Humor
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto. Writing belongs to me.
Notes: Here's the first chapter! Sorry for any delays. I'm so so so unbelievably flattered by the feedback I got on the tiny little prologue alone, though! Thank you all for your lovely comments. I really hope this ( Read more... )

fanfiction, kakairu

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bgreenwivy September 28 2010, 03:20:11 UTC
*GIGGLE SNORT* This was amazing. The only thing that could have made this better...scratch that this was great. Keep up the good work.

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sejitsu September 28 2010, 03:39:20 UTC
^///^ Wow, thank you so much! Don't hesitate to tell any things that could have made it better, though~ <33 I'm so flattered by your quick review, too! ^^

I'll have to work on the next chapter even more quickly. XD

Thank you again!

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jofelly September 28 2010, 03:23:02 UTC
WHOAAHHH I'm so glad you got this out! xD
It's awesome awesome awesome xDD
Can't wait for the next chapter!

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sejitsu September 28 2010, 03:40:24 UTC
*hug* Wow, thank you so much, Jo~ <3 I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I'll have to write even more quickly, at this rate. Your review was so quick! *tears of joy*

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jofelly September 28 2010, 03:54:35 UTC
Ha ha ha, I didn't even know you barely posted it xD
Excellent work!! *hugs*
You're like- a triple force, you got everything down! *sniff* so proud of you ;A;

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sejitsu September 28 2010, 03:58:40 UTC
Haha, that's funny. XD So many quick reviews at once, though-- I can't believe it! *happy tears*

T-triple force? Like how? Haha, I only WISH I had everything down. T^T

But your flattery fills me with such glee. ^///^ *bighug*

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dangerprawn September 28 2010, 03:24:45 UTC
Sniggering like a maniac at the fact 3/4 people Kakashi interacts with in / near the missions room are hung over. It really gives the impression that the place is some sort of frat house.

Also at this: "[Iruka was] utterly bewildered by the random ink stains on his hands and pieces of tape in his hair." (Perfect.)

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sejitsu September 28 2010, 03:42:45 UTC
NINJA FRAT HOUSE. *dies laughing*

I'm sorry, I just can't seem to write with any seriousness. XD But, I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless! ^///^ *glows from praise*

That mental image of Iruka seriously cracks me up too. XD

Thanks for your lovely comment! ^_^

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80x18 September 28 2010, 03:34:01 UTC
The scene with Kotetsu and Izumo amused me so much! I had fits of giggles reading this. 8D

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sejitsu September 28 2010, 03:43:56 UTC
I swear, they write themselves. XD Which is strange, considering this is a KAKAIRU fic, but... XD *laugh* I'm glad they entertained you! ^_^ Thanks so much for the review. <3 So happy that you enjoyed it!

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achillona September 28 2010, 03:52:29 UTC
really enjoying this...

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sejitsu September 28 2010, 03:56:43 UTC
A gold star! *_* *blushhhhh*

I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying this! ^_^ I hope the future chapters don't disappoint! Thanks so much for your feedback. <3

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