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sejitsu

Golden Slumbers

Feb 28, 2010 23:51

Title: Golden Slumbers
Rating: K
Genre: Romance/General Fluff
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto. I only own the (somewhat cliched) plot-bunny.
Notes: No spoilers. Done for the Love Event/Lover's Month on the KakaIru DA Group. Only warning is extreme fluff. Hope you enjoy it? Feedback is love.

Special thanks to my lovely beta, ( Read more... )

naruto, drabble, fanfiction, kakairu

Comments 18

plague_of_eden March 1 2010, 11:35:46 UTC

Sweetly done n.n

;Bounces around; Pure, undiluted fluff--and I enjoyed it. I swear I've been 'Angst' auto-pilot for like weeks so its good to break the cycle with some good old fashioned sugar. =]

Pink apron...*nosebleed* @_@

sejitsu March 1 2010, 16:56:59 UTC

>w< Yay~! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I really like reading and writing fluff after reading or writing angst; it really balances stuff. (Although somehow I always lean towards writing more fluff)

I want to see him in the pink apron too. >w< Maybe a lemony followup... *nosebleed*

Thanks for the comment! :)

megyal March 1 2010, 13:23:03 UTC

Aww, so sweet! I really like how Kakashi feels when Iruka looks at him.

sejitsu March 1 2010, 16:58:11 UTC

Thank you~! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :) Especially since your writings always make me gush and want to write things. <3

otherblood March 1 2010, 13:29:52 UTC

So sweet. I envy the two <3. You write this well, lots of heart-warming-ness :)

sejitsu March 1 2010, 16:59:17 UTC

I love them in love. ^^ Thanks for the nice comment; I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it! :)

lisagems March 1 2010, 13:47:21 UTC

Thanks. I needed fluff today. Sweet.

sejitsu March 1 2010, 17:00:29 UTC

:) There are just days that are like that. *nod* I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading. ^^

meggo_and_vodka March 1 2010, 18:23:04 UTC

Oh...You've turned me into a big pile of mush. Too fluffy! The adorableness melted me!

About the apron...was he wearing only the apron? Hmm? Because I realized that that would turn the line 'a blush just barely dusting his pale cheeks.' into something quite perverted. ;D

sejitsu March 1 2010, 22:15:02 UTC

*grin* Well, I'm glad the fluff had its intended affect! XD

Hmm... I really did want him to only be wearing the apron when I first thought of it, but that would have taken the story in a completely different... place. So, no, but I'm sure that's all he'll be wearing after a short interval. XD Can't let it go to waste.

Although I never considered those lines like that until just now. Now I can't get them out of my head. *has a giggle fit* Oh man. Pervy indeed. >w<

Thanks for reading! :)