Shiryoku Ochikochi no Ritoku Ushinau

[sejitsu]

Title: Shiryoku Ochikochi no Ritoku Ushinau
Rating: T
Obligatory Disclaimer: Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto. Writing belongs to me. Includes slight angst and a bit of psychological trauma.
Summary: To lose one thing is to lose many, but there is no loss without gain. Kakashi's outlook will be forever changed.
Notes: The title roughly

Comments

[new_moongirl]

OMG SO BEAUTIFUUUL! TT^TT sniffle. really nice. really nice indeed. U_U

[sejitsu]

^///^ Wow, thank you! <3 I'm so glad to hear that you liked it~ *w* Thanks so much for commenting! ^^

[gingitsune32]

OMG! I want to beat everyone who bullied Iruka with a stick. A very big stick!

This is definitely a turn/plot I never read before & I love the way you took the story & ran with it.

Thanks for sharing!

[sejitsu]

Me too! But I think Kakashi has it covered. He doesn't even need the stick. XD

Thank you! I tried to come up with something at least slightly profound in terms of what it means for Kakashi to lose the Sharingan. Glad to hear that you enjoyed reading! ^^

Thank you so much for your comment~ :3

[unjaundiced]

It's a beautiful thing you've got here. They both suffered so much that for a little while I was thinking maybe Iruka really hadn't made it. You're evil! But they'll make it. They'll become even more legendary. n__n

[sejitsu]

*wibbles at your praise* That means a lot, coming from you! *w*

I had the hardest time putting them through all that and finding a way to pull them out of it again... And trying to keep them in character the whole time. ^^; *hugs them close* Poor guys. I hope they forgive me. But yes, they will indeed become more legendary!

Iruka's nothing if not resilient, right? Kakashi too, for that matter. Together, they're pretty much unbeatable. <3

Thanks for your lovely coment~ ^^

[achillona]

i've read this twice, when you first posted and today... i still need kleenex.

love it.

[sejitsu]

*mad blushing* That is such a huge compliment. Just, wow! *q*

I'm SO glad to hear you enjoyed it~ <33 *hands over tissues*

[achillona]

what many have forgotten, and i know you haven't, is that Kakashi was very formidable and very powerful before he received Obito's gift. maybe eventually he'll receive another eye transplant.

the copy ninja may be gone, but there's still Kakashi...

Just Kakashi...

how much more awesome will he be after he's rehabbed...and how much more powerful, now that sharigan's no longer there to drain his chakra.

[mytornsandals]

simply beautiful... very heart-warming special the
"Just Kakashi" part. It really made me smile.

[sejitsu]

Thank you so much! <3 I'm really glad you enjoyed reading this~ :)