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[FIC] With Arms Wide Open - Chapter VII

Apr 12, 2007 23:01

Title: With arms wide open
Author: seilari
Chapter rating: PG-13
Main pairing: Naruto/Sasuke
Summary: Sasuke betrays again and makes sure to hurt Naruto enough to prevent him from following. Naruto will sacrifice everything to bring him back again... or will he?
Disclaimer: Naturo © Masashi Kishimoto. I own none of the Characters.

A/N: No ( Read more... )

sasu/naru

Comments 7

butterfly17000 April 13 2007, 04:52:59 UTC

Ohhhhh... this is getting to be so exciting!!! Now that Sasuke realizes his mistakes, what's he going to do eh?? He'll need to fight against time to save Naruto don't he? Awww... I love it!!! (But Sasuke's quite dumb to believe the words of the enemy, I guess his worries for Naruto clouded his vision at times eh...) Ah, but at least we now know that he does care for Naruto, so well, he's partially forgiven. (He needs to smex Naruto thoroughly to be completely forgiven!!!) Kyaaaa!!!! ^_____^

seilari April 15 2007, 11:58:00 UTC

Well, everything seems to be against out poor Naruto, but I really had enough of reading fics where Sasuke was being the victim, albeit a composed and calculating one, never making mistakes. Che, I want to see him work his arse off to make amends. But once again, what I want and what this fic is all about tend to be two different matters. I just hope you won't be disappointed in the end.

Yare yare... I start babbling again. Anyway, thank you for the review, sunshine! It makes me happy knowing you're still following despite it being a Naruto fic, and not viewfinder. Speaking of which, a good dose of "Last Dance" will do me some good, so start working on that next chapter, ne? ;]

ja!

afterburn April 15 2007, 06:16:09 UTC

SASUKE WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?????? *beats his head into a brick wall*
Oooh yes let's trust Orochimaru. He's supposed to be smart, ne? ALL LIES.
You're really making this intense. And I can't wait for the continuation so nice job and good luck~!

seilari April 15 2007, 11:46:38 UTC

Maa... thank you for the kind words. Lately I seem to have the mind only for my Viewfinder fic. It seems that I can't slap myself out of Asami's or Takaba's characters and get back into Naruto-world. Sad, but nothing time and few Naruto episodes can't fix. ;]

Orochimaru is an ass, but a damn smart one. More surprises to come, so stay tuned! :D

afterburn April 15 2007, 22:31:33 UTC

Well your VF fic is coming along nicely too. 8D
I shall indeed stay tuned for more!

blackmoon_fire April 15 2007, 11:18:43 UTC

Gah Sasuke!!! You...you MORON!!! Yes, lets all trust Micheal Jackson's twin. A perveted snake bastard. The evil guy. I wonder if Naruto is really the dobe in this couple. You'll have to do a lot to be forgiven now. Or mabey not, its all on Naruto now. Hope Sasuke can save Naruto in time and can finally admits he like him. If not I'll take him!

seilari April 15 2007, 11:43:07 UTC

Hai hai, Sasuke is a jerk. But for some reason we still love him. i guess we're crazy like that ;]

I'm so glad you're enjoying this. And I think we would both agree on the fact that Sasuke isn't the sharpest crayon in the box when it comes to figuring out whom to trust. That appears to be the price to pay for being such an uptight ice-cube all his life.

Michael Jackson's twin *shudders* X_X

Thank you for the review!