Bread and Circuses 1/2

[seerargent]

Bread and Circuses - 1/2
Rating: P/G, Gen
Word Count: 5,732/12,593
Disclaimer: The characters are sadly not mine. I’m just sticking pins into Winchester dolls for the purposes of general angst. Sorry about the holes!
A/N: Consider this my virtual Easter egg for my flist. That said, this is so not the angst-ridden Easter fic which is still a work

Comments

[saberivojo]

Very interesting. I am wondering about our English? Nobody...who likes Days.

I like this odd man out POV, with just a hint of Dean underneath. "Look after Sammy." Yeah, our boy is in there somewhere.

Can't wait for chappy two.

Welcome back to my LJ :)

[seerargent]

Yes, Nobody's language is deliberately not Dean's. He's more than off-balance. The not-swearing, or use of euphemisms has been imposed on him, he just doesn't know what else he's lost or how much he has changed. But the real Dean is still there, struggling to get out. Question is - what will it take to get him there? There is one scene in the last part where you think he will break through, but I'm mean and I make you wait for it (apologies in advance). A lot more angst (though thankfully not as much as And Die In Thee which just about broke my angst metre for a month!) coming up in Part 2. Stay tuned for John's arrival. Part 2 will be up within 24 hours, I just got sucked away by work, damn it. Thanks for the comments.

[noirbabalon]

Crack me up and break me at the same time...he thinks of himself as Nobody but still has to protect Sammy? Knows there's a hole around the unanswered question that will never be asked "Mom?" Arrggghhhhh!!!!

Loved the flow of the story. It just gels really well (don't you love my constructive Crit?)

Loved As he shut the door firmly on the horrors outside, Nobody made himself a solemn promise never to go out there again. The world was indeed a very scary place. That whole scene of the Nobody cleaning the kitchen just had me smiling. Actually apart the breaking me, I was smiling most of the way through this as Sammy and Bobby attempted to deal with the doppelganger Nobody...heehee Earl Grey if you have it?

Looking forward to part two! Can't wait to see John's reaction.

You know me

[seerargent]

I can never do total humour without a good serving of delicious angst.

I love the crit, any type, any way I can get it. Bring it on :)

pt.2 just up in the last hour. More giggles for you hopefully and ::winces:: maybe a little more breaking of my readers:: Scuttles away pouting jealously over Noir's cool, animated userpic.

inside Nobody's head

[mysticmhorag]

A clean freak who drinks EARL GREY? Is this a parallel universe?

Lovely job so far possum. Looking forward to reading Part II.

Re: inside Nobody's head

[seerargent]

I think crack!fic is so far out of any universe it could be said to be in another galaxy, so anything is possible. Enjoy the surreal tea (I almost made it Lady Grey!), sorry about the angst on the saucer.

[tabaqui]

Heeeeee!
So fun. I love it. I love that Dean is somehow...taken over? Or transformed? Or has absorbed? A rather...prissy...personality. Wheee!
:)

[seerargent]

ooh stretchy Dean in bed userpic - yum!

Prissy Dean. Yeah - I couldn't help myself ::snickers::

[sams1ra]

Hee, Dean comes off as pretty British... =)
‘Do you have any cake forks?’ ROFLMAO

[seerargent]

Such a shame I didn't give Dean a chance to use a fork on Martha at the end!