Comments | seekers_of_fic: Off Limits 2/3, Cam/Vala, NC-17, Stargate SG1

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Off Limits 2/3, Cam/Vala, NC-17, Stargate SG1

Aug 07, 2011 09:04

Title: Off Limits
Author: VirkatJol
Rating: NC-17
Summary: When Cam realizes he has feelings for Vala what can he do if she's with Daniel?
Warnings: Exploration into Vala's life as Qetesh (Rape/Non-con remembered)
Disclaimer: I don't own them. But I'd like to if someone is giving them away...

A/N: This was written for stargate_summer. I joined late so it's ( Read more... )

stargate sg1, series: off limits, rating nc-17, pairing: cam/vala, author: virkatjol

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virkatjol August 7 2011, 19:19:57 UTC

It's definitely the most graphic thing I've ever written. I was actually pretty nervous about making it so... bad... I guess. But it was impact, I wanted to get the impact of how terrible it was for her. How she was raped just as much as the people that Qetesh raped.

I hope it worked without feeling over done and just graphic...

MAGIC HANDS CAM!!! <333 I would like him to hold me tooooo.

No mirrors but PEOPLE ALL OVER. lol

I had to post it all because of the challenge. :) SO LUCK YOU!

karen_b August 7 2011, 21:46:21 UTC

Okay, so if I say that was far easier to read than I expected, is that a good thing or a bad thing? :) Perhaps the way it was told helped. You did that very well. I'm impressed. I feel so bad for them both.

I did like him taking care of her and all her needs. So wonderful. And hot too. Perfect follow up to the bad stuff.

And then he gets himself hurt. Isn't that just like a man?! lol I'm glad she found him and helped at least with the broken bones.

Very powerful chapter.

virkatjol August 7 2011, 21:49:30 UTC

I am not sure... I HOPE it means that I did a good job writing it. I did have a hard time writing it and figuring out the right way to do it...

Yes I kinda put them both through the wringer in this fic. MEN I TELL YOU!

Thanks for reading!!! I'm glad it didn't bug you overly a lot.

MMMM HOT STUFF. ALWAYS HELPFUL FOLLOW UP!

karen_b August 7 2011, 22:27:02 UTC

It does, for sure. You definitely wrote the hell out of that. It turned out very well.

Actually, it didn't bug me at all. I mean the way I was concerned about. It's not like I enjoyed reading it. But it was told in the past and despite the pain it caused her, it was more like looking at from a totally different person. That may have helped, too.

Either way, I'm glad I read it. It ties the whole thing together.