Forcing Her Hand, R/K NC-17

Jul 13, 2010 23:03

Title: Forcing Her Hand
Author: virkatjolRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

pairing: richard/kahlan, rating: nc-17, author: virkatjol

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morgenwrites July 14 2010, 04:04:06 UTC
MINE. OMG MINE! IT HAS SOOOO MANY OF MY ~LIKES!

and now that it is mine, <33333 it and you sfm bb!!! You know how much I loves it, but I will to be giving you your proper long comment of all my loves first thing tomorrow! As soon as I get my sleeeeeps.

TY FOR WRITING FIC FOR ME BB. IT FIXED MY SAD DAY AND IT IS THE BEST THING EVER!!!!

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OK, I AM BACK!!! AND I LOVE MY FIC SO MUCH. IT'S MINE FOREVER!!!

She had to tell him, but she couldn't. The words always disappeared on her lips; her courage would fade and she'd go back the next day and argue with the council. They were a few steps away from ordering her to take someone. She had to choose someone else or she had to validate her choice in Richard."Confess him," they'd told her. She shuddered at the thought of him being soulless, a mindless slave to her, a shell of the man she knew.

Bawwwww. This whole paragraph. So much wonderful angstytiems. And I love that K keeps putting off telling R again and again. It makes so much sense, even though it's such sadtiems.

"Don't ( ... )

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virkatjol July 14 2010, 19:10:14 UTC
The HTML doesn't look failed now! So that is good. I can see how you'd have HTML fail before your working times.

THIS COMMENT MIGHT BE ALMOST AS LONG AS THE FIC, MAYBE. <3333 that ( ... )

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valhallalilly July 14 2010, 04:05:03 UTC
HOLY CRAP IT"S LONG ALL AT ONCE

YW! I'm happy to be wanting moar fic as you are so good to write it!

HIII YOu know I love all the angst in this right?! ITS EPIC SOMUCH
POOR BB K IS SO STRESSED OUT.

okay I too will add more later *crosses fingers* otherwise I'll be up till 2 am reading :O hee
LUBB

CLEARLY DO NOT BELIEVE ME WHEN I SAY BRB
oh well
"It's not nothing. Nothing isn't something to bring you to tears."
Aww I SO love the beginning of this fic how it sets up K as having struggled with what she knew was coming and trying to gain more time. And I love this line, Because I've been there.

"You're beautiful."

"Don't say things like that."
HAVE I MENTIONED I LOVE THE BEGINNING OF THIS FIC? ALL THE ANGST! Oh man this line too is perfect it's so very Kahlan and it's so sad. LUCKILY FOR US YOU ARE WRITING HAPPY ENDINGS :D
Seriously perfect line.

I won't lie to you, but it's not what keeps me here with you, every morning and every night."
Perfectly win lines of girly squee you have them in this fic! <333 them and their love ( ... )

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virkatjol July 16 2010, 03:16:03 UTC
OMG EPIC COMMENT OF WIN!!! <33333

K is having so much angst and R just wants to help her, he is like stop evading the question!!!

I am super happy that you love the dialogue cause you know how much angst I get over it.

<333 that you love my lines and think that they are perfect. ILU

KNEEESSSS ARE ALWAYS FOR YOU!!! Cause ILUSFM

Well it's a good sort of hot. heee At least you haz the AC on. I love AC.

Yes she was like telling him one more time before he might not be HIM anymore. b'awwwww!!! I am glad that you got it.

R is lulzy sometimes in my head and it gets to the paper sometimes.

I am glad that you are loving this fic so much it has robbed you of your words. <333 TY for reading !!! <333333 I can't give you enough hearts apparently.

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rosewing86 July 14 2010, 04:52:18 UTC
SAVING MY SPOT!!!!

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rosewing86 July 14 2010, 05:23:40 UTC
jjfbajeabvgaekjgkJAGHAJLGALBG!!!! I LUZ THIS SOOOO MUCH!! dawww poor K, she got all sad and stuff and was all like "i has to take a mate so i can make bb's" and i luz how R is like "YOU SHALL MAKE NO BB'S BUT WITH ME!!!" and then he doesnt take no for an answer and the K is like "DAMN THE CONSEQUENCES!!'' heeheheh i luz this! did i say that already? hehehe well just in case you didnt hear, I LUZ THIS SO MUCH I WOULD HUG AND SQUEZZE IT ALL DAY LONG! OOOOOHHH I IS IN MY HAPPY PLACE! *bows before your mightyness and awesomeness* as i has said to MOEGENWRITES , i would give you sparkles if i had dem. but does not :( *faceplam* SO HAS SOME FAIRY DUSTES STUFF INSTEAD!!!
*Shakes fairy dust all over you!* NOW YOU CAN FLY!! hehehe okay, i needs to go to bed. delirium does weird things to my head! but any ways.... great job bb, keep up your mad amazing, epic story skills!!!

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virkatjol July 14 2010, 11:47:48 UTC
That is many letters that are not making sense together!! Heee I AM HAPPYFUL THAT YOU LUV THIS!!

R wasn't going to let her be touched intimately by another man yo, or woman, HE IS LIKE THERE IS A STAMP ON YOU THAT READS MINE!! K wasn't that easysauce to convince, but He is a good convincer.

Bowing to me is awesome. LULZ! Pickgems is my sparkle provider. no worries! You may hugs the fic for as long as you want! It will probably not hug back much cause it has much angstytiems in it.

I will try not to lose my skillz with the fics. I am GLaD YOU THINK I HAZ THEM!! TY FOR READING AND COMMENTING BB!

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karen_b July 14 2010, 05:07:02 UTC
Try not to faint, since I am commenting right away! Miracles do happen.

That was so damn hot. I loved every part. Her pain at thinking she was going to lose him. Her pleasuring him. His anger and determination. Which, of course, leads to him deciding there was no way in hell she was taking another as a mate. It's all good! *sigh of perfection*

I liked that he sort of thought he'd need to convince her more while seducing her, but she just let him get it all going. She's not stupid after all. And it didn't take much, even when she was only half trying to stop him. Of course, I wouldn't put up a fight either. ; )

I am really glad you posted this for her and we all got to share it too. This totally made my week.

Possibly off to read again. :D

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virkatjol July 14 2010, 11:40:06 UTC
When I saw your name on my e-mail I was liek ZOMG she's already read it WIN!! hahaha

Awww you loved it all <333 TY!! I can't believe K would think she should take another mate, she is so silly sometimes.

I would not be fighting him trying to seduce me either. nope! NEVER!! Please COME TO TRY RICHARD!!

I am happy that it helped make her more happy. She was very sadtiems. Making everyone happy makes it EVEN BETTER THOUGH!!

Read it MANY TIMES!! That is really the biggest compliment after all.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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karen_b July 14 2010, 14:17:15 UTC
LOL I know, I think I shocked myself. But the timing was perfect. No annoying kids were around and I got to read and comment. Plus, seriously, I had been hoping you would post something soon. I was in need of fic. The heat wave we suddenly got here, got even hotter by this. In a good way.

Kahlan is silly like that. Always trying to do what she thinks is best. Please. Like she could or he would let her. I'm glad he showed her what's what. ;)

Well, I often read many of your stories more than once. Some many times, in fact. And they get pulled out when there's a smut shortage! lol

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virkatjol July 14 2010, 19:12:49 UTC
I've been writing this one for a while. It took me a long time due to the angst also it is super longsie.

I am sorry, but not really, about increasing the heat wave! heee

I know she'd never be able to go through with it ever, but she might get close! If Richard let her, which he won't. It is a never ending cycle of NOPE!

I am glad that you get many reads out of my fics! I love reading fics over and over too!

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beckyjanel July 14 2010, 05:13:19 UTC
OMG this is the most amazing fic ever!!!! So hawt and romantic at the same time I'm completely melted into a puddle after reading this!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!!! You are an AMAZING writer!!! XD <333

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virkatjol July 14 2010, 11:43:02 UTC
Hee!! Wow most amazing fic ever? That is awesome!!! I LOVE YOU SFM FOR READING IT SO WE ARE EVEN!!!

D'awwwwww amazing writer? *blushes* TY BB. I don't think I'm amazing, but I loves to writes. I am HAPPY THAT YOU THINK SO THOUGH!!!

I am glad that you thought it was hot and romantic!! <333 TY for reading and commenting!!

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