day 8

Mar 17, 2010 18:52


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musicloveraar March 19 2010, 03:14:41 UTC
I really do love your writing; you manage to convey the childish beauty in eating strawberries, but then there is clearly something else hidden beneath; with the other person not noticing much of anything. Gorgeous, really.

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nikkikitty March 25 2010, 22:12:21 UTC
That last line was so unexpected! The first part was so whimsical and pretty and lovely and the imagery was amazing.

And the last line was a cut to the heart :( Wonderful tho.

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