I intended to pick out and quote, but I kept finding more and more gorgeous sentences.
So he paced, and he waited, and he learned to hate the door for not echoing with Rose’s knock.
There is something about this that pulls at me. I kept going back to it… learned to hate the door…
Ancients, mysteries that tantalize but can easily kill, a potent unknown enemy, mythology, the Doctor desperate for Rose, who is and isn't herself… your storytelling style fits the feel of it all. like the seer's hands, or a bed of black velvet algae on the forest floor.
Thank you so much. I tried to balance my word choice and syntax between this being set in the 50's BC and also being a modern sci/fi story. I'm glad you think it works.
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So he paced, and he waited, and he learned to hate the door for not echoing with Rose’s knock.
There is something about this that pulls at me. I kept going back to it… learned to hate the door…
Ancients, mysteries that tantalize but can easily kill, a potent unknown enemy, mythology, the Doctor desperate for Rose, who is and isn't herself… your storytelling style fits the feel of it all. like the seer's hands, or a bed of black velvet algae on the forest floor.
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