after nearly two months of leaving my poor LJ alone

May 31, 2011 19:12

                  Rita could barely choke out her spells.  I can’t let you do this, she’d said, so she’d fought.  It was the only way to do anything justice: Fight.  That’s all her life had become lately, was running and fighting.  She’d been all right with it, as long as it was for Estelle, but this

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seeds_of_chaos June 1 2011, 04:20:18 UTC
Oh trust me I'll be writing more Riven if inspiration strikes which I'm hoping it will. I kind of have a couple of concepts for a multi-chapter one but concepts are all I have. I really want to write more of them.

Also, I will never tire of that Austin Powers reference.

How'd I do for my first time writing for them?

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violettango June 1 2011, 07:09:39 UTC
PERSONA4 YESSSSSSS

How are you enjoying it so far?

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seeds_of_chaos June 1 2011, 15:38:58 UTC
I'm liking it! Yosuke is definitely my favorite; he's adorable. Lessee...I have Rise now (and she's so fucking cute I can hardly stand it) and I'm in an interim period between dungeons. King Moron just got the axe.

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violettango June 5 2011, 02:48:31 UTC
I love Brosuke so much. He's so embarrasingly awkward that I want to roll my eyes and smile at the same time. Kanji definitely has to be my favorite character from the game, I just love those nice jerkasses!

It's great that you're enjoying the game!

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folenfant June 1 2011, 19:26:12 UTC
FINALLY GOSH I check this page every week or more.

I thought this was excellent writing. The
"run-on sentences" you complained about weren't so bad, in fact, I thought they were suiting to the panicked atmosphere. It is mostly from the point of view of people on the brink of death, after all.

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seeds_of_chaos June 2 2011, 13:30:24 UTC
Good! That's what I was going for, but I wasn't too sure I'd done it correctly ^^;;

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theboxturtle June 4 2011, 04:11:43 UTC
First LJ update in two months AND I CAN'T EVEN READ IT.
THANKS, JADEHOBO. THIS IS REALLY SWELL.

I don't really know why I'm still bothering to guard myself from Vesperia spoilers, since my chances of ever having a PS3 are pretty much nonexistent, b-but I wanna experience it myself! Somehow. Someday. Maybe I should continue watching that playthrough on Youtube that I never finished...
Also, I love all of the new icons. Very naiz.

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seeds_of_chaos June 4 2011, 06:21:56 UTC
D: you should watch the YouTube playthrough because AAAAAGH I NEED SOMEONE TO FANTARD WITH FOR HOURS ON THIS PAIRING. SERIOUSLY. I NEED IT OR I'M GOING TO EXPLODE.

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