Rita could barely choke out her spells. I can’t let you do this, she’d said, so she’d fought. It was the only way to do anything justice: Fight. That’s all her life had become lately, was running and fighting. She’d been all right with it, as long as it was for Estelle, but this
It was second nature, and by
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Also, I will never tire of that Austin Powers reference.
How'd I do for my first time writing for them?
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How are you enjoying it so far?
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It's great that you're enjoying the game!
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I thought this was excellent writing. The
"run-on sentences" you complained about weren't so bad, in fact, I thought they were suiting to the panicked atmosphere. It is mostly from the point of view of people on the brink of death, after all.
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THANKS, JADEHOBO. THIS IS REALLY SWELL.
I don't really know why I'm still bothering to guard myself from Vesperia spoilers, since my chances of ever having a PS3 are pretty much nonexistent, b-but I wanna experience it myself! Somehow. Someday. Maybe I should continue watching that playthrough on Youtube that I never finished...
Also, I love all of the new icons. Very naiz.
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