Severus/Lily: "The Things That Cannot Be Changed"

[hintofawhisper]

 Well, I hadn't written a Severus/Lily fic in a long time, so I felt the time was now, especially before final exams next week. I kinda should have been studying for that, but I had this fic idea in my head and I really didn't want to lose it. :)

Title: The Things That Cannot Be Changed
Rating: T (for abuse)
Word Count: 3,921
Status: Complete
Fandom:

Comments

[moonchildfairy]

What a beautiful story! :-) I absolutely loved it :-)
The only thing I noticed is that you jump between the past and present tense quite a bit, but that doesn't take away from the awesome story, you did such an outstanding job on it :-)

[hintofawhisper]

Thank you! :D I'm really glad you liked it. :)
Thanks for telling me about the present/past tense; I wrote this at about four in the morning so I didn't notice. ;)

Thanks for commenting!

[fayzbub]

Wow, beautiful, sad, and engrossing. Poor Severus. Thanks for posting.
Alison

[hintofawhisper]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :D

[mrswilson4]

omg... this is too beautiful... honest this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read! aw the final part:

"He saw Lily in the boy now, more than anything. All traces of James Potter are gone, and now, it’s really only her.

The last thing he saw was green"

*tries to hold the tears* thank you thank you!! i hope to see more from you soon!

[hintofawhisper]

Thank you! :D I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

I'm also glad you liked the final part. :)

I love your icon, btw. ;D

[ravebutterfly]

ending was simply beautiful

[hintofawhisper]

Thank you! :D I'm glad you think so.

[chocoluvr]

Good job in showing Snape's feelings for Lily and his feelings about Harry too.

[hintofawhisper]

Thank you! :)