Comments | see_the_horizon: Severus/Lily: "Home"

hintofawhisper in see_the_horizon

Severus/Lily: "Home"

Aug 01, 2007 17:52

This is rather short, but it was an idea that came to me last night and I felt that I just had to write it. I kept the sentences shortly structured because I felt it helped the mood of the story. But still, I think it's worth posting. It's up to your comments for me to know if I was right. ;D

Title: Home
Rating: PG (K+)
Word Count: 620
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severus/lily, lily evans, severus snape, fanfiction, rating: all ages

Comments 78

nocturnes August 1 2007, 23:21:07 UTC

Oh, wow, that was so incredibly beautiful. "I did it all for you."
A glimpse of her older self passes through the emerald eyes, and they are understanding.
"I know."
Lovely. Great work, as usual :D

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 00:51:22 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. :)

maidoforange August 1 2007, 23:24:08 UTC

Awwwwwww...that is just wonderful. So sweet and sad.

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 00:52:38 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked the fic. :)

cmer August 1 2007, 23:35:00 UTC

This? This is EXACTLY what I needed after reading chapter 33. I don't know why JKR won't give us a tiny scene like this in the book, because Snape deserves SO MUCH MORE than what he got.

Loved this. Thank you so much for this, it definitely helps me move on from the heartbreak I've had to nurse the past couple of weeks. I'm totally mem'ing this and recommending it to my flist. Awesome, beautiful job. :)

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 00:54:21 UTC

I know! I thought Snape deserved a little something more after that chapter, and that was basically how I got this fic idea. ;D

Thank you! :D I appreciate your comment and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

coldfiredragon August 2 2007, 00:06:09 UTC

Oh love! I love this! *hugs them* I'm so glad he found peace at last.

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 00:55:16 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it. :)

Yes, I really did want him to have his peace as well. ;)

ihaveapapillion August 2 2007, 00:39:36 UTC

That made me really happy, actually!
I was feeling really sorry for Snape, wondering what his afterlife would be like since Lily and James are obviously a pair whenever Harry sees his dead parents.
By the way, I have a fanfic too, about Lily and Severus and James and Sirius in their first year at Hogwarts... how do I post it onto the Snevans community??

snevansdramione August 2 2007, 00:56:35 UTC

Go to the profile page of the community: http://community.livejournal.com/snevans/profile

Find the little blue pencil on the toolbar above the name of the community and click it (if you hover your mouse over it, it'll say post to "snevans") and then it'll open up to a journal entry and you just fill it out like you would on your personal LJ.

I hope that helps.

hintofawhisper August 2 2007, 01:00:55 UTC

I'm glad it made you happy. :D

I know; I knew James and Lily were always together when Harry sees them, but I let Snape have his own scenario in the afterlife. Let Snape be happy for once, the poor guy. :)

All you need to do is go to the community, and at the top, click "join community", a new page will say "Join", click that button, then the next page gives you the option of adding the community to your friends list. After that, go back to the community, then up at the top it should say "Post to this community". Click on that, then you should be all set. Were there any specifics you needed to know besides that, such as how to use lj-cuts or anything? If so, let me know. I hope this helps. :D