Death Knight's Christmas

[sedesdraconis]

A story about my death knight. Warning: sad.

Comments

[sarkat]

You're right. That's a sad story.
I tear up:(

The very simple style works well here. I can't explain quite how, but it seems like... a good interpretation for what a gnome in shock would sound like.
The image of a gentle, bat-loving, tear-wiping ghoul charms me to tears (Or maybe charms me and makes me tear up because I know that can't end well...?). But you could probably have predicted that:p

Was there anything in particular you wanted me to read this for?

[sedesdraconis]

hmm. I hadn't actually meant that Batstealer wiped the tears. The "and clear the ice of my face" was meant to conjoin to "stand up again", not "watch over me". I think about that (whether it needs to be changed, how to re-write it if it does).

[miatauro]

It's the comma that makes it read like Batstealer is doing the clearing

[auryanne]

Here via Mania's blog, but I love reading WoW stories. I really enjoyed this one, hope you don't mind if I watch you :)

I keep mine here if you want to see some of mine!

http://community.livejournal.com/the_exodar/

[sedesdraconis]

Hi, I meant to reply to your comment, but it slipped my mind, and I just remembered.

Glad you liked the story :)

Feel free to read my journal, but as you may have noticed by now, I don't write a lot of WoW stories. I wrote this one because it happened and I had to figure out some way to deal with Axelandra's trauma that I was getting echoes of.

She's been a really fun character to play; very independent of my intentions for her and very emotionally engaging.