TnB Challenge: Pirate Christmas Story (24/24)

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Title: Pirate Christmas Story (24/24)
Author: Aranel Took
Characters: Hal Jordan/Kyle Rayner
Challenge: there_n_back Advent Calendar Challenge - Day 24
Prompts: bottle, wharf, violin, moon, monkey, fork, hole, lock, sheet, pendant, crystal, cookie, letter, money, tail, chair, bread, seed, peaches, snow, rope, boat, baggage, candle
Rating: PG-13
Words: 2400

Comments

[nalanzu]

Love token, monkey, kid. :D Awesome. I liked it, it was cute. I never really got the impression that you didn't know where you were going with it; it just seemed to flow.

...and now you've got me curious about what happens NEXT.

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[heartofoshun]

It was an interesting experience for me, since it forced me out of my writing "comfort zone".

You could have fooled me. As soon as I understood the concept of the progressive list of words, I knew that I could never do it. And, you ended up writing a novella.

Great story! Now when's the sequel so we can find out what happens with Kyle in England?

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[superfixated]

LOL!

I'm so happy you finished this! Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time and energy to write such a huge and wonderful fic! I enjoyed it so much. Your action, suspense, and all your characters were fantastic, and I'm eager for more Hal/Kyle whenever you're ready. I definitely enjoyed the introduction of Mona and then Sodam, they were adorable and I hope those two characters will appear in your GL pirate universe in the near future. I was especially horrifed by Sodam's upbringing but it's all a bit common nowadays, which is so terrible. As I and others have said, I can't wait for your sequel, I hope you'll continue this brilliant universe again someday, though you do deserve a well-earned break after accomplishing such an admirable, hefty task. *hugs tightly*

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[nancylea57]

those four points aside you made a wonderful tale; i will have to think obout progressive word counts next time, my story would have been better for it.

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