TnB Challenge: Pirate Christmas Story (12/24)

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Title: Pirate Christmas Story (12/24)
Author: Aranel Took
Characters: Hal Jordan/Kyle Rayner
Challenge: there_n_back Advent Calendar Challenge - Day 12
Prompts: bottle, wharf, violin, moon, monkey, fork, hole, lock, sheet, pendant, crystal, cookie
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1200
Summary: Elseworld. Pirate!verse! Christmas in Tortuga.
Author's Notes: Halfway point!

Comments

[aranel_took]

[superfixated]

Words cannot express how ecstatic I am to see that you're back and writing this series again, further exploring and developing your characters beautifully. I loved that pendant Hal gave for Kyle and the fact that you took time making those images for the readers, it was a wonderful bonus! Your sex scenes as well as all your Hal/Kyle stories always leave me aching to read more. This is the best Christmas gift for Hal/Kyle fans, and I couldn't thank you enough for taking so much time and energy to write all these brilliantly and beautifully written chapters in your pirate universe. <3

[aranel_took]

[darthbatgirl]

Hee I'm glad Kyle found Mona, though I'm still routing for Mona to find the Lantern and see the light. "grins" Hal would soooo hate it.

Though I agree with Hal it's weird when pets "watch" I've always got the impression that they were critiquing.

Wonderful job!

[aranel_took]

[anonymous]

“I don’t need your help,” Kyle muttered before Hal could even offer it. He was still mad that Hal had brushed off his worry over Mona.

Wow-you've really turned kyle into a whiney little pussy. This monkey stuff really isn't that funny_i'm wondering if there's some other reason you wrote it in the story. like there's going to be a big fight between the good monkey and the bad monkey.

[aranel_took]