Among the Flowers, Beneath the Stars

[aiseiri_47]

Title: Among the Flowers, Beneath the Stars
Pairings: Rose/Scorpius, Rose/Lysander, Canon Trio Gen pairings.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Fluff; fleeting, vague sexual references
Word Count: 6,600
Summary: "What had come over her, exactly, she wasn’t sure. She hadn’t been able to stop thinking about him for weeks, ever since she’d realised that the

Comments

[xgreen_princess]

...there was no differentiating the two; perhaps it was one emotion, not loving or being loved, but the feeling that they were both fully in love with one another, together.

Absolutely perfect.

[aiseiri_47]

Thank you, Mari, dear. I think that was my favourite line, personally :)

[drcjsnider]

Oh just lovely... I enjoyed how you set this up and how adorable you made Rose and Scorpius. I'm glad they decided not to hide how they feel about each other. Best to get over the awkwardness early.

[aiseiri_47]

Glad you liked it, thanks for commenting :D

[cherise]

*applauds* oh, I'm cheering for the two of them! You've made them perfect for each other, and anyone who doesn't like this pairing would at least feel very fond of what you've written here. Even though I was confused at first why it started at three (I am that dumbwitted) I think the order was exactly as it should be. It flowed very well as a story, even going back into the past, and you brought it very nicely to the present by Rose commenting on the last week

[aiseiri_47]

Hee, glad you liked it. I think the reason Rose didn't seem as developed was because it was her PoV. I always find that's the impression I get when I read from a character's PoV. It just takes more time. I'm writing another R/S, now, and her character is rather fierce in that one ;)

This read so nicely that the only thing that bothered me was when Rose said Ginny and Harry so casually, without Aunt or Uncle. Seriously, only thing.

I refer to my aunts and uncles by their first name only. I've also never encountered anyone (in person) with their aunts or uncles that does any different. The only time I ever put "aunt" or "uncle" in front of it, is if I'm referring to them to someone who doesn't know, and then it's sort of like "My aunt, Fiona..." So, it doesn't occur to me that she should say "Aunt Ginny and Uncle Harry", and the lack of using such titles is closer and more familiar, and on the whole, much more natural for me.

[katakokk]

Breathtakingly gorgeous.

Is there a sequel? *wishes*

[aiseiri_47]

Thank you and, hee, sort of. I'm working on two more R/S fics now, both of which are (in my mind) extensions of this story. :)

[ginervaweaslby]

Wonderful story, I particularly like how it flowed together. One thing that was confusing to me was the section's not being numbered in order. I kept looking through your community for the first two parts.

[aiseiri_47]

Thanks, glad you liked it. Sorry about the numbers; the story is six segments of narration, and the two in the middle are a flashback. I could have simplified it, admittedly, but I did it more for embellishment purposes, than anything else. I think, if you read it straight through, it's pretty clear - at least that's what I tell myself because I don't want to remove them XD Anyway, yes, again, thank you for reading and commenting :D