Comments | secretprobation: RPF: Can't Always Get What You Want

dashakay in secretprobation

RPF: Can't Always Get What You Want

Oct 23, 2009 10:44

FANDOM: Battlestar Galactica RPF
SUMMARY: Sex, drugs and rock and roll.
PAIRING: Mary McDonnell/Edward James Olmos
RATING: NC-17
DISCLAIMER: Real people, totally fake situations. Please don't read this if you can't tell the difference.
WORD COUNT: 781
NOTE: This was written for bsg_pornbattle. The story is set in the same universe as Don't Ask, Don't Tell, where Mary ( Read more... )

fandom: battlestar galactica rpf, year: 2009, fandom: battlestar galactica, pairing: mary mcdonnell/eddie olmos

Comments 17

icedteainthebag October 23 2009, 16:07:03 UTC

I need a fire hose now. Seriously. OMG. This is gorgeous. Oh.... I've missed your gorgeous porn. All the details and the gentle rhythm of it. ♥ ♥

I always say this but you always get me with things like this:
despite the long session on her bed and the faster, nastier one in the shower.
You don't even have to go into detail. It kills me anyway.

I love your descriptions of her (imagine that) and his funny, sexy observations.

"Jesus doesn't have anything to do with this," she says, mischief in her eyes.
I can hear it in my head. And it is good.

He loves how she almost never stops smiling during sex. She's like a blissed-out angel of sex
God, So Say We All, dammit. lol. And also, I love the lazy feel this line has, and the entire fic...definitely reflective of their state, and that he can only come up with "blissed-out angel of sex" is funny but awesome.

To wake up beside her and have her face be the last thing he sees before he falls asleep.
Aw.

I LOVE YOU PLP. THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY FRIDAY.

dashakay October 24 2009, 15:07:38 UTC

YAY, I MADE YOUR FRIDAYYYYYYY!!! That's the BEST feedback EVAR.

MWAHMWAHMWAH, THANK YOU LOVELY PLP OF MINE!

missparker October 23 2009, 20:15:54 UTC

nom nom nom.

is how i feel about this delicious treat.

dashakay October 24 2009, 15:07:56 UTC

Thank you SO SO much!

paulrissarahany October 24 2009, 19:31:29 UTC

Oh my word. I haven't even read it..........

but if it's in the same universe as the last one....I'LL LOVE IT! =]

dashakay October 26 2009, 01:45:03 UTC

Yay, pre-feedback WINS! :)

paulrissarahany October 26 2009, 01:59:32 UTC

Well...I loved it. XD

I just lOOOOVVEEE this entire universe. Well...the idea of it, obvs. Are you going to write a to Don't Ask, Don't Tell? Like...as in Season 2?

Also, I was wondering if I could friend you?

dashakay October 26 2009, 02:03:49 UTC

So happy you liked it! And who knows where this story might go. My brain and I don't always communicate well. ;-)

Of course! Friend away!

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dashakay October 26 2009, 01:45:34 UTC

Three times feedback? Wow, do I need to pay you?

Thank you!!!

misscam October 25 2009, 14:16:58 UTC

That was decidedly hot.

Got a quite mellow mood out of it too, which is nice for a Sunday.

dashakay October 26 2009, 01:46:22 UTC

Yay for mellow moods. They are nice to have on a Sunday.

I'm delighted you enjoyed this. Thank you SO much!