Abysmal Bodies: Sepia (Shades - Part 1)

[secret_weapon]

Series: Abysmal Bodies
Title: Shades (1/3)
Chapter: Part I - Sepia
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: Gen. Pavel Chekov, various OCs.
Words: ~2800

Summary: The yellow days are the worst of all because because they are so few and far between. It is on these days that he starts to understand why the others hurt so and why

Comments

[chrryblssmninja]

I really liked how you envisioned this entire backstory. It feels really vivid to me.

[secret_weapon]

Thank you bb. I really do appreciate how you always find time to read and comment on my stuff.

You always make me feel a bit better about myself.

[jessofthebugs]

Oh, yay! You posted it! I really like the way you've depicted her wild mood swings and the difficulty inherent in having a family member with a mental illness. Linking each mood with a color (colour?) just makes the whole thing more intense. Well done!

[secret_weapon]

Thank you, bb. :)

I couldn't have done it without you!

The mood-with-colour thing seemed to me as something a child might think of, or at least mini!me would think to do that - I can't speak for all nine year olds.