The Finest Cuts

[eveanhei]

On the waterfront of Lake Union, down among some warehouses, is a tiny sushi place. It has no tables, just a coatroom and a small bar, and only three people can sit in the place at a time. Everyone comes in alone-it would not occur to you to invite company

Comments

[shadefell]

It's the ending of creepy pasta that needs to be the strongest. As much as the general feeling and emotion of the piece needs to be strong, the ending needs to be almost a punchline.

You've nailed that here.

[eveanhei]

This one is possibly the only thing of this sort I've written that's unnerved me a bit-- I'm a sucker for the "You screwed everything up and someone -not you- will bear the consequences!" line.

[faecat]

Can I just tell you how glad this story made me that I do not eat sushi.

-from Bellevue

[eveanhei]

Oh but it is so worth it.

[eveanhei]

The moral of this story: happy holidays! Talk to you in the new year! Avoid consumerism, you never know which purchase will take your soul!