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m_strangchild September 10 2015, 00:56:29 UTC
“Well, if sex brought us here, maybe if we do it again, it’ll take us back?” he suggested.

Chloe gaped. “How can you even think about sex at a time like this?”

“It was just a suggestion!” he said defensively. “And not outside the realm of probabilities.”

:D I like seeing Clark be so logical.

I'm glad they've found a friend who can show them around.

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phillydragonldy September 11 2015, 00:19:57 UTC
Yeah, that is my favorite part of the chapter too!

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rathmaria September 10 2015, 01:43:28 UTC
Clark want to have sex again to reverse it
glad they found someone

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iluvaqt September 10 2015, 02:53:33 UTC
Someone else mentioned the period and that got me to put my thinking brain in gear instead of my smut brain, which can suspend all logic.

For the temple to be lit and in its prime condition the period would be between 430 and 480 BC, it's said to have been completed during the Pelopennesian War (Athens vs Sparta).

Loved the snarky banter and Chloe's quick thinking always covering for Clark. This is fun.

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babydee1 September 10 2015, 10:08:45 UTC
Also well spotted! Necessary changes will be made later today.

Author says thank you! :-)

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futurescribbler September 10 2015, 08:02:09 UTC
He he, Chloe Chloe Chloe don't you know that boys can think about that at ANY times?

And they apparently speak the lingo! I always knew that they were clever. :D

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