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Thank You!!!!!!!! m_strangchild September 10 2015, 00:07:34 UTC
I came home from work early today because I'm feeling sick. Seeing this was a big pick me up. I love dirty boy Clark, and now they've traveled back in time. Eager to see what happens in Chapter 2

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iluvaqt September 10 2015, 01:11:14 UTC
Whoa and a mental visual that inspired a manip is all I've got to say about that!!! And where's Chapter 2!

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babydee1 September 10 2015, 01:51:51 UTC
"Whoa and a mental visual that inspired a manip is all I've got to say about that!!!"

I will see if the author has one, but I'm sure they'd appreciate anything you might come up with!

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rathmaria September 10 2015, 01:39:04 UTC
Clark being bad hehe they went back in time haha

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djdoena September 10 2015, 02:04:32 UTC
Unless before they were in 450 BC, they went back in time more than 800 years. ;-) More like ~ 3250 years

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babydee1 September 10 2015, 02:31:55 UTC
The author has given permission to amend the timeline, and thanks you for your observation :-)

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futurescribbler September 10 2015, 07:53:52 UTC
Wowzers! That was brilliant. It seems like it should be the start to a real novel.

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